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Long, NC-17, How To Take A Fall (Conclusion, Part 1)

Jun 20, 2005 11:49

"How To Take A Fall" - NC-17 H/D

Title: How To Take A Fall (conclusion)
Author: tea_and_toast
Pairing: Harry/Draco
Rating: DPY (Delightfully Porny Yay!)
Word Count: ~14000 for these two parts together.
Disclaimer: Don't own them, not making any money, no infringement intended.

A/N: This is the concluding section of a two-story sequence. The first story, ( Read more... )

Comments 8

anyotherknight June 20 2005, 17:58:30 UTC

I really like the interaction you have through here. The conversation flows well and compliments the streaming, constant feelings of action you've got running here.

One thing: you've got two in-text A/Ns intact within the body, both in red. Just so you know.

wordplay June 20 2005, 18:21:43 UTC

Yeah, I know. :D This posting, as I should have made MUCH more clear, was a compromise between continued very polite requests that I get off my ass and finish the damn story :D and my feelings that I just couldn't make it do what I wanted it to. So, yeah - it's in a sort of quasi-finished state, and those are mostly to bridge you between all that I had finished.

I'm glad you enjoyed the parts of it that you did, though. :D And thanks.

anyotherknight June 20 2005, 18:55:15 UTC

Quasi-finished is fine, and they don't interrupt the flow of the story, or anything. They just looked like some of my beta's comments when I get drafts back, so I wanted to make sure they were intentional.

Even if you don't think it went where you wanted, I think it was awesome.

wordplay June 20 2005, 19:11:36 UTC

*nods* I think the red makes it feel more beta-like, but I know that so many people at least half skim when they read, so I wanted to make sure that nobody wandered into one of those sections by accident and ended up confused. I appreciate you looking out for me.

And I'm especially pleased you enjoyed it. :D Thank you!

chrysos June 20 2005, 21:16:48 UTC

You really are a tease, aren't you?
I click on "continue to part 2" and then I get the messeage I'm not authorised to see the entry!
Is there a reason for this? Are only your LJ-friends allowed to read how it ends? If so, then please friend me?

wordplay June 20 2005, 21:20:59 UTC

Wow - that's a level of wickedness of which even I am not capable! Are you still getting that message? B/c it's not locked, I don't think.

wordplay June 20 2005, 21:22:51 UTC

*blushes* OMG, I'm not a tease - I'm just a complete bleeding idiot. The link that was there was a misdirect.

Fixed now. SOrry about that. *hides under the desk*

chrysos June 20 2005, 21:31:21 UTC

I'm glad it was easy to fix!

Last week I posted a fanpic by mistake to some LJcomm that had absolutely nothing to do with the subject and I got showered with comments like WTF?
Luckily the mod forgave me.
The moral of this is: if YOU are a complete bleeding idiot, so am I, maybe even more so. ;)