Fic: Ego Deceptio

[seektheinfinite]

This is a sequel to vomit-bunny's amazing fic self deception, which can be found here if you have'nt read it.

Title: Ego Deceptio
Author: seektheinfiniteRating: pg

Comments

[vomit_bunny]

Wonderful! Well, not wonderful because oh my god poor John, but hopefully you know what I mean... beautifully written and really emotionally charged!

I love it, in case that's not clear.

I've been miserably ill for the last week and this has just brightened my day no end. Thank you so much for writing this!

[seektheinfinite]

Oh no. I hope you feel better soon.

Thankyou, it means a lot that you like it. Thanks for letting me continue with it. It was such a great concept originally.

[looking4tarzan]

Oh wow, it reminds me of the twist in life on mars (UK), but infinitely more awesome because it's JOHN!

(You know I'm routing for the Sherlock reality right...because it is... you know...reality!)

although one teeny point
those intense, blue-grey orbs are wild and desperate
I would have stuck with eyes there

and changed
There are things there that John has never seen before. His eyes, how could he have missed them?
to Those eyes

I'm being pedantic I know but it just grated a little *gets back in box*

Awesome fic!

[seektheinfinite]

Thanks, although I have to admit to not having seen life on mars.(I know, only person on the planet who hasn't) It's on my list, it's just the list is getting longer.

Sherlock is real, of course he is. I didn't intend for it to go this way, it just kind of happened, the happy ending just didn't seem right somehow.

Feel free to be pedantic anytime, I'm always open to constructive criticism, and after reading that bit again, I've changed it as you suggested, it does read better.

[looking4tarzan]

I would recommend life on mars over ashes to ashes. I loved john sink in it. I saw the finale before I went back to catch it up. I'd been off work ill.

I'm trying to think of ways to bribe you to write more! :D

I just felt it read a little better that way.

[seektheinfinite]

Hmm, I don't suppose you might happen to have Benedict Cumberbatch stashed away somewhere, that would be an acceptable bribe ;)

[pearljamz]

It's rather depressing BUT I LOVE IT!!!

[seektheinfinite]

I'm sorry to be depressing, it wasn't my original intention it just sort of happened that way. Glad you liked it though

[nejem]

Ouch, this hurt so bad... :(

[seektheinfinite]

Sorry :( It wasn't my original intention when I started the fic, it just seemed to go there.

[nejem]

No no no, don't get me wrong, I absolutely loved it! It was beautifully written, absolutely intriguing and it kept me doubting whether or not Sherlock was real at least a dozen times! It was perfect and it went straight away in my memories! \o/

With my previous comment I merely wanted to point out how dreaful this is for poor John :(
Still: beautiful, painfully beautiful! *__*

[seektheinfinite]

I'm grinning like a loon here at the fact you like it enough to put it in your memories!

This was completely different to my usual style, so I'm so glad it worked.

Thankyou again, for your lovely comments

[wihluta]

Niiiiice. Painful, but really cool!