One Uncomplicated Life, To Go Please

Jun 19, 2013 18:38

One Uncomplicated Life, To Go Please
PG
Jongin/Sehun
Sehun serves behind the counter in a café & pastry shop while Jongin goes to college.

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one uncomplicated life to go please, kai, sehun, sekai

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baby_duck_yuto June 21 2013, 12:16:11 UTC
wowowowowww
can i just-

uhhh i love this so much, kaihun has the cutest dynamics i'm biased lol
and the kiss! omggggg so adorable <3333

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seisdemayo June 24 2013, 03:31:57 UTC
No you're not just being biased, it's true!!! lol They're so cute and dumb ugh who can tell they make a hot couple too?
The kiss part is just pure rainbow word vomit lol thank youuuuu

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seisdemayo June 24 2013, 03:37:50 UTC
YEAH RYN I was curious at first who you are and then I had to read til the end. lol I'm sorry okay! I didn't mean to!!!

U KNOW ME SO WELL I WILL NEVER WRITE BROKEN SEKAI (OR MAYBE I WILL WHEN IM DEPRESSED) BUT NOT TODAY ;; Come one throw me your whole bed and your whole room!

The kiss part is definitely just a total word vomit but I guess it slightly worked, sobs. /pats Jongin & Sehun, you did well.

YES U KNOW IM NOT GONNA HESITATE TO TAKE BAEKHYUN (I need a pet) lol yaaaaaaaaay! And hail for the most promising stupid couple of the year! ♥ Thank you sooooooooo much Ryn!

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ephazalea June 22 2013, 09:55:53 UTC
Ahhhh, omg hi this is Laika~

This is so good and I enjoyed it a lot. It's all angst angst fluff fluff fluff angst fluff angst flufffffff and it's perfect - from the flow of the story to the characters and dialogues (!) At first I thought Jongin was just a creeper who, you know, has this unhealthy obsession with Sehun, which was really cute nonetheless. But as the story progressed, you built up their dynamics and development and it's really nice. I especially enjoyed the parallelism between the individual events of Jongin and Sehun, and the recurring dialogues! Jongin's visits to Sehun's cafe, the "best friend/catch", the yellow snapback, and finally the confession and kiss. Ahhhh, so cute and refreshing. And don't worry about being cliché! I missed reading things like these and this is exactly what the Sekai fandom needs. ^^ ♥

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seisdemayo June 24 2013, 03:48:24 UTC
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Thank you so much Laika! ♥ Aaaaah this makes me so happy! I'm glad you find it smooth and cute and ;;; ugh. You put everything in one comment, I really appreciate it. It helps me with my writing! ♥ The kiss is the most cringe-worthy part but yay! Trueeeeeeeeeeeeee! It doesn't hurt because this is sekai~ ♥♥♥

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shining_petal June 22 2013, 16:28:30 UTC
awww this is so cute~~~ ur fic is the best ever ><
both idiot sekai are more than adorable
i love how both of them have a feeling together for a long time
and finally,~~~~ happy ending !! <3 <3 <3 >

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seisdemayo June 24 2013, 03:49:16 UTC
Thank you so much, sobs TTTTTTT
They're so dumb but it's so cute it's okay <3
Happy endings and sekai = ♥ Thanks for reading~

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_ellebasi_ June 23 2013, 12:58:59 UTC
crying because this is oh so beautiful and I'm also a sucker for rainbow haired Sehun. ;~;

The dialogue involving kisses got me all giddy and fluttery inside.

I love this.

Moar, please and thank you. :3

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seisdemayo June 24 2013, 04:10:48 UTC
I share the same feeling! I love Sehun with rainbow hair ♥

I guess it's all the kiss part haha ;;;;;;; sekai fluff, no regrets. Thank you sooooo much!

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