Begin The Procedure, OC/Canon fic, Chapter 14
Author's note: Ehehe, it's Chapter 14, yay! And now we get to see Luxuria. And there's already another SIN... Mostly, this chapter focuses on Markus, Valerie, and Elena, with very little on the guys back at Caduceus. :D But I'm working on these things, as well as things coming together and relationship development, as usual~ Hope you enjoy <33
( Chapter 14 - Under the Knife )
( Chapter 14 - Under the Knife )
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He's just so funny, I can see why you chose to make a romance fic about him.
Uhm... I dunno what your future plans on this are, just, y'know... try and not have this villain make a fuss over Nicole. Don't make it seem like she's that important to be kidnapped, you said, she's still not that good at it. My suggestion, maybe if you plan ot doing that, having him kidnap her by mistake; and do NOT make Nicole save the day. We all know what a pain "I'LL COME AND FIX EVERYTHING YOU GUYZZZ" OCs are >,>
Again, other than that, very nice and, once more, lol @ Markus
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Yeah, I'm gonna make it be an accident I think xD;; I have to admit, this part has been worrying me for a long time OTL And yeah, she's definitely not going to be much help at all x'D She's probably just going to be all WTF IS THIS.
Thanks a lot x'D <3 I'll definitely use your advice!
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