Begin The Procedure, OC/Canon fic, Chapter 16

[seiyonashi]

Author's note: Chapter 16... |D I had fun writing this one as well. I hope it doesn't come across as Nicole being all Mary Sue-ish and that she's still okay OTL But fffff. I tried. We'll see.  I'm already starting on Chapter 17! Yeah! I'm gonna do my best! Might not get it done tomorrow because I have a prizegiving thing to go to. =7=;; But hey.

Comments

[amideadn0w]

Wow... they're keeping their cool. Me, if I were captured, I'd be screaming and kicking (and trying to kick the villain's ass, then eventually getting killed >,>)

I think her hesitation with making descissions and her uncertainty make her far from a Sue. Besides, she's not the one who solves everything and saves the patients ^^ try to leave most of the good stuff to the canon cast, she can help out, but outshining someone wouldn't be good.

Very nice job so far!

[seiyonashi]

xDDD Haha, yeah... It's not something that's common! And anyone could kick his ass, he's not particularly strong ;DD

Thanks, man ^^ I've been trying my best with that! You have no idea how relieved I was to read that you thought she wasn't a Sue OTL And thanks once again <3