Begin The Procedure, OC/Canon fic, Chapter 2

[seiyonashi]

Author's Note: I've been getting so excited over this that I've already got this chapter written |DD I hope this chapter isn't too boring and Nicole is still okay OTL I admit I somewhat glossed over what kinds of things Nicole was doing so it wouldn't be dull to read ^^;; But here Markus finally makes his appearance, along with Valerie. C: And the

Comments

[d_artagan]

Niiice, I mean, I like this fic, but, obviously because I've never played the game I can't comment on how they are in character or not, but still, I'm liking it so far! XD

[seiyonashi]

Haha, well thanks ^^ I'm glad you like it! I tried my best to keep them in character, but Markus in particular is quite a difficult character to write. |D

[amideadn0w]

Good to see Nicole is still struggling -I'm glad you're giving her obsticles :)

A minor note on human interaction, don't make her seem like she's better than the actual cast. I know that's far from what you're doing, and I applaud you for that, as she does make mistakes -which is why she's a good OC. Mistakes make you human, hence why I enjoy reading about her, she's reacting like a normal person would in her situation. Nervous, sometimes unsure, and mostly not right -you're going in the right direction, very nice :)

[seiyonashi]

Of course :D I enjoy seeing her struggle xDD

Thank you very much! I try my best to make Nicole very normal - she's just gone from a small hospital to a very large facility, so of course she's not used to the way they handle things ^^ Your comments are very helpful, and I'll try to keep them in mind <3

[amideadn0w]

I share that quality, I love when my OC suffer, too xD

[seiyonashi]

What you just wrote there is true. Everyone has their moments when they feel weak or stupid or just hate everything, but they break through it. And the more difficulties they suffer, the greater success is when they achieve it. I think you put across a very good message ^^

I'm working on people she doesn't get on with already - in the chapter I'm currently writing, it seems like Dr. Tsuji is looking down on her a bit xDD And of course, there'll more than likely be other people later.

Ah, thank you very much xD I didn't want to go on about her appearance too much because I thought it might be a little dull to read. C: And of course Nicole herself isn't terribly concerned with her appearance xD As long as she looks relatively presentable, that's fine with her. Yes, I more than likely will add other things later, thank you for your advice!

Any time <3 Your commenting and advice has helped me immensely. I'm planning to use it a lot more in chapter 4 (because 3 is nearly done). And thank you! I know, it seems somewhat over the top that

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[anonymous]

Thanks...this looks really interesting. I am looking forward to having my says!