Begin The Procedure, OC/Canon fic, Chapter 5

[seiyonashi]

Author's note: Wow... This is such a big chapter @A@;; It certainly made up for the shortness of the last one! I hope you guys all enjoy it <3 Now you can see why Nicole didn't go to the conference. And now, with the sudden surgery they had to perform... Well, things are sort of coming together. C: I'm sorry, there hasn't been much relationship

Comments

[amideadn0w]

Wow... this is starting to get good!! O_O A villain and everything... man you're really original and awesome, you know that? :D

As for Nicole, good to know that, once more, she has struggles. She's pretty much a normal, every-day Jane and that's what a Mary Sue isn't. Very well done ^^.

[seiyonashi]

Thank you so much <33 I'm glad you like it! And of course there's got to be a bad guy involved somewhere, it makes things more interesting to write ;D Though it's typical of the series that someone starts trouble at some point xDD

Yep, I'm really trying my hardest to make her normal. :D I'm glad that it's still working!