Comments | seket_ninstuku: I actually wrote something XD;;;

seket_ninstuku

I actually wrote something XD;;;

Mar 21, 2008 20:36

This is a piece that I'm doing with a friend. I'm writing Heechul's POV and she's writing Eeteuk's POV. She's currently working on the mirror in Eeteuk's POV but here's mine in Heechul's and I hope it's enjoyable. ^^V

( In the palm of my hand )

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anonymous March 22 2008, 04:35:35 UTC

lovely :D I liked this story very much. Shou and Kevin liked it too :D well done :D

lil_aqua_chic March 22 2008, 04:35:45 UTC

Woooooowww
Majorly intense! Lols
Never would have thought Teukie was that kind of person hahaha
But yes this is majorly intense
Rella, u should write more fanfics!!!!!!! ^^

seket_ninstuku March 22 2008, 04:52:17 UTC

^////^
LOL I suppose so in a way yes XD Sex tends to be intense when Heechul is involved I feel. If it's not intense you're doing something wrong :P
Hopefully Pt.2 will shed more light on Teukie's character for you ^^
^////////////^ Thank you very much Wookie! (huggles) ♥ I might have to do just that ♥

mtfanatic March 22 2008, 04:46:44 UTC

"So I played innocently and I grinned, wrapping my arms around the angel next to me, holding him close just in case he flew away while I slept" By far my favorite line out of this.

Wooooow Tay! That was... (nods and smiles)good. Definitely good. I liked it a lot. Definitely not your everyday Teukie. It was nice seeing him in a different light that others tend to overlook. And their relationship just seemed... I don't know how to word it. It seemed very dreamlike. Like HeeChul was going to wake up from it all. That Teukie might just fly away from him. It was very all too real. But with their relationship it fit.

Good Job!!! I can't wait to read part 2!
(PS I miss you lots <3)

seket_ninstuku March 22 2008, 04:56:54 UTC

Awwww, I'm very glad you liked that line, I did too ^^ I like the image it gives.

Yay! I didn't crash and burn! That's very nice to hear XDDD W00t!!! (giggles) I'm glad you noticed although it's hard not to. With Pt.2 will come better insight into Teukie so stay excited and on the look out! Hmm, dreamlike, I see. Ah yes that makes sense, how horrid that would be for poor Heenim XD Ah more horrid fates! It pleases me that you say this. I was trying to be realistic with it. I try my hardest to depict Heechul as accurately as I can without falling too terribly short. Yay for fitting! ^^V

Oh my Ra I can't wait either XD Teukie-hyung won't even let me read the notes! ;.; But I'm waiting as patiently as I can <<;
(MISS YOU TOO BUMMIE!)

arcticshatter March 22 2008, 04:52:25 UTC

Wow...
Just...wow...
Please excuse the lack of coherent thought for a moment..
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Okay, That...was hot...definitely hot...I've read that stuff in a story before...made me kind of blush xD But it was definitely hot.
And I love your writing <3 I can't wait to read the mirror for it.

seket_ninstuku March 22 2008, 05:01:18 UTC

^//////////^ Oh wow you really honor me, thank you so much ♥
(completely excused for as long as you need to be gibbering) XD ♥ ♥ ♥
(pats head with cold rag) And this to shall pass...sadly XD;
(laughs) Yatta! I was going for that, yes. (giggles) Oh my~ ♥ I thank you very much and my Heechul preens happily X3
Well I might just have to start writing more then XD So far people really seem to like it. If my Teukie-hyung and I feel like it we miiiight just continue this but that depends on many things and is still totally up in the air so we shall see ^^ If you liked this then I think you'll love Pt.2. My hyung is so much better at writing than me XD; More so...we write different emotions very well ^^ ♥ Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

mylittlebambi March 22 2008, 06:23:08 UTC

after reading this, i think i really have huge respect for our super leader. taking care of one impossible heenim is tiring enough but 13???

i like how you describe heenim slowly giving in with lots of denials in progress XD their relationship is just <33

seket_ninstuku March 22 2008, 15:53:38 UTC

Yatta! Respect for Teukie = win ^^ ♥ (laughs) :333 That would be rather difficult, ne?

I'm glad you noticed that and approved ^w^ Isn't though?!? XDDD I love those two together.

mylittlebambi March 22 2008, 16:50:58 UTC

he's really cut to be a good mommy XD he should join Nanny 911 when he retired LMAO~~~

yeah, teukchul's quite rare. tanks for writing it but i still have difficulty to believe it was teukie on top. in my eyes, they are....both uke ^^

seket_ninstuku March 24 2008, 07:43:53 UTC

(nodnod) I agree with you there ^^ LMAO Oh dear, he'd need more water bottles.

Isn't though? I really wish it wasn't ;.; I love it so~ You are very welcome! ^^ Hmm, I can see why you would say that, but then I watch Don't Don and there is noooo doubt in my mind that that man can't top like a pro ;3

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