Fuck! I wrote out a long comment and damn LJ lost it!
This was so, so wrong, and yet she couldn’t stop him; not because of his strength, but because of her own weakness. She wanted this; and the want temporarily eclipsed the fear of repercussions. Her fingernails scraped his scalp gently and the beast purred.
Angel’s hands curved round her hips and cupped her bare ass, squeezing the firm globes before sliding down and wrapping around the back of her trembling thighs, pulling her closer and opening her up. Blunt teeth nipped her clit through the sodden material and her legs buckled. Fabric stretched tight and a sharp snap, and then moist flesh against flesh. She moaned aloud and it was his turn to tremble.
I loved this part but especially the last two lines. I'm trembling, too. Gah!
It couldn't be that difficult, he decided, rather amused at the enormity of what he was about to pull off. As long as he kept in mind that this family was off the menu, and continued with the mission, none would be any the wiser- and he'd get to
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You are one lucky girl Zan!! I'd LOVE to have a sekrit admirer write me a fic like this! This was so up my alley! LOVE dark Angel and when Angelus comes out to play!!! Great job on this fic!!!
Lucky is an understatement girls! I'm blessed to have such a wonderfully sweet friend like Cali who spent so much time to give me such a 'More than words can say' sequel!
Cal, there are so MANY passages to applaud you on I'd end up quoting the whole fic, my fav line of all time?
"The demon roared in triumph; a silent apology from the soul a bare whisper in the air."
God! Such poetry Cal!!!! I caught my breath when I read this line. An unrivaled living, breathing set of words. I *SAW* this feeling. Sheer grace and violence combined.
Ack! Naughty Zan! Naming names, grrr. But glad you liked that line *bathes in the love* Now, as the secret is out, have to put everyone straight: this was a collab- 50-50 but also a 100% with the delectable Kyrieane. Thanks to K *lick* for joining me in this. She so rocks!!!
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Lots of pieces, sayings and quotes in here. The ending was all my 24 christmases come at once! I do so love it when the soul goes bye-bye!
Nummy treat this was, yum!
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This was so, so wrong, and yet she couldn’t stop him; not because of his strength, but because of her own weakness. She wanted this; and the want temporarily eclipsed the fear of repercussions. Her fingernails scraped his scalp gently and the beast purred.
Angel’s hands curved round her hips and cupped her bare ass, squeezing the firm globes before sliding down and wrapping around the back of her trembling thighs, pulling her closer and opening her up. Blunt teeth nipped her clit through the sodden material and her legs buckled. Fabric stretched tight and a sharp snap, and then moist flesh against flesh. She moaned aloud and it was his turn to tremble.
I loved this part but especially the last two lines. I'm trembling, too. Gah!
It couldn't be that difficult, he decided, rather amused at the enormity of what he was about to pull off. As long as he kept in mind that this family was off the menu, and continued with the mission, none would be any the wiser- and he'd get to ( ... )
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Cal, there are so MANY passages to applaud you on I'd end up quoting the whole fic, my fav line of all time?
"The demon roared in triumph; a silent apology from the soul a bare whisper in the air."
God! Such poetry Cal!!!! I caught my breath when I read this line. An unrivaled living, breathing set of words. I *SAW* this feeling. Sheer grace and violence combined.
I humbly thank you.
Zan
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Now, as the secret is out, have to put everyone straight: this was a collab- 50-50 but also a 100% with the delectable Kyrieane. Thanks to K *lick* for joining me in this. She so rocks!!!
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