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Dec 09, 2004 16:09

Happy birthday, Kenya!

Title: Half the Battle
Pairing: Spike/Xander
Rating: NC17
Summary: Xander left after Entropy, Spike gets sent to find him. Things...happen. Xander wants to know some things, because, as G.I. Joe says, "Knowing is half the battle."

Half the Battle )

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cleeaz December 10 2004, 19:48:20 UTC
Good, good, soooo god damn good - clee

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yourlibrarian December 10 2004, 20:00:54 UTC
Such an interesting fic, the way it began, the way it ended, and the steps along the way. Loved the image of that ending scene, too.

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cloudiecat December 11 2004, 09:39:34 UTC
This story is simply gorgeous. It really got to me and I felt the grace and healing the boys were able to give to each other. Loved how beautifully you showed the boys giving and receiving in equal measure. The writing, the characterisation and the ending - just perfect, all of it:-)

Lucky you Kenya:-)

cloudie

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paperk8 January 7 2005, 12:21:20 UTC
This is really beautiful.
Hot, varied sex and emotion.
Fabulous observations and characterization.
There are tons of wonderfully quotable things here, but my fave has got to be: Xander leaned forward. “You do smell really good,” he said, his voice low.
“I smell like you, Xander - you’re all over me, inside me.” Spike watched Xander’s eyes go wide at that, and smelled arousal, so he took a chance - he leaned in and kissed Xander very softly on the mouth.
Perfect timing there. Whew.
Thank you for sharing.

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spankys September 19 2005, 21:29:51 UTC
God, this is beautiful! I loved the pacing, the characterizations, and of course, the hot sex! I cried.

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