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seleneswan

[fic] - in the sky

Feb 03, 2011 20:32

Title: in the sky
Type: Fanfiction
Style: One hour on LJ
Fandom: Harry Potter
Rating: T
Characters: Severus Snape, Lily Evans
Pairing: Lily/Snape
Prompts from Sonya: writing in blood; listening to the radio on lazy Sundays; the rumors that make your spine tingle; "I thought we'd be a fairy tale, you know?"; mosaic of regrets; "Not even amortentia could ( Read more... )

one hour on lj

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pandastacia February 4 2011, 02:42:09 UTC

OHMYGOD FLAILLLLLLING.
that was cute.
so cute.
& angsty.
which is my mood, right now.
& the prompts were so creatively used! 8)
E FOR EXCELLENT.

seleneswan February 4 2011, 02:48:42 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! I'm still not sure I did, haha, but I suppose my confusion of whether or not I'm pleased with this is due to the ambiguity of it all.

I kind of skewed the prompts a little. they're not quite worded exactly how you worded them. buttt, I'm happy that you flailed for it. (:

T FOR THANKS. ;D

pandastacia February 4 2011, 02:54:50 UTC

nahhhhh, it's fine. phrase them or use them in a way that fits. sometimes you can be really ambiguous- use the idea instead of the actual words & phrasing? idk- i'm kinda open with prompts... >.>

at least it's not T for TROLL.

seleneswan February 4 2011, 03:05:03 UTC

I try to keep the prompts as close as possible; I like the challenge of fitting them in as perfectly as possible, but sometimes I just sort of slack about that. or it's just impossible. whichever.

H for HAHAHA. x)

justlovely_9 February 4 2011, 04:02:53 UTC

Oh my god. That was just beautiful and wistful, actually.
I really like it and the prompts were wonderful (Sonya), I really like how you incorporated them in!

seleneswan February 4 2011, 04:08:39 UTC

I'm glad you liked ittt. (:

justlovely_9 February 4 2011, 04:11:31 UTC

There's just this sort of hopeful vibe you get but then with going down the memories, it's like all your dreams are crushed and it's sort of painful. It's depressing but it's so wonderfully written that you feel the full impact.

seleneswan February 4 2011, 04:27:36 UTC

that's good! I was aiming for that. it was more chronological than anything, but because the chronology is sad itself, it transferred nicely. so you'll have to thank j.k. rowling for that, haha.

I'm flattered you think so! I'm still really unsure of it, myself. and it's so short, on top of it all. but I'm glad you liked it! makes me more...reassured?

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