That's a fair continuation of the initial story. I'm still not sure if it's a utopia or a dystopia.
Just one small copy editing note: The verb is spelled "soothe." The spelling "sooth" is an archaic word, pronounced with a different -th sound, meaning "truth."
Thanks! The app is something that could work as a prosthetic for ADHD sufferers (such as me). Though I have a story in the pipeline on how that can go wrong.
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That's a fair continuation of the initial story. I'm still not sure if it's a utopia or a dystopia.
Just one small copy editing note: The verb is spelled "soothe." The spelling "sooth" is an archaic word, pronounced with a different -th sound, meaning "truth."
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Thanks! The app is something that could work as a prosthetic for ADHD sufferers (such as me). Though I have a story in the pipeline on how that can go wrong.
I've fixed that error, thanks. I owe you a beer.
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My favorite kinds are ginger and root.
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