a fic by Mystery Self-Lover! : Wrap It up With Unchanging Love

Nov 06, 2012 22:35

Title: Wrap It up With Unchanging Love
Rating: PG
Group/Pairing(s): Arashi with subtle Aiba/Ohno, Ohno/Nino, Sho/Jun.
Word count: 3436
Summary: A simple chronicle of Arashi’s first ten years; behind all the sparkles, there’s a couch they call theirs.
Warnings: Unintentional anachronisms, perhaps. :p
Notes: Everything, every single thing, alludes to ( Read more... )

+ pairing: aiba/ohno, @ 2012, + pairing: ninomiya/ohno, + pairing: matsumoto/sakurai, + group: arashi

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morninglights November 7 2012, 07:46:11 UTC
Let me tell you, whoever you are, I absolutely love how your brain works. This story feels just right, just like Arashi. If that's not the fic, which got them the most spot-on, then I really don't know which fic is. Seriously. This is what you call perfect.

And I love the way you included all those Arashi lyrics. It fits so wonderful. ♥

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gomushroom November 24 2012, 08:29:38 UTC
You know, the first time I read your comment it was ... awesome! I'm really happy to hear that the story came out right. It wasn't the clearest fic, but, yeah, seriously, I'm very happy to read what you think of this one.

And the lyrics were originally just time markers; it ended up giving another layer to the story. Thank you very much for such a beautiful comment ♥!

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thoroughlynerdy November 7 2012, 21:31:27 UTC
Oh, this was lovely! I love, love the way you handled this! The way that the objects mirror the relationship of the band- they start out as strangers on a couch but through the years they each bring objects and slowly build a home and become an extended family. This was really lovely and really comforting!

Thank you for sharing, anon!

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gomushroom November 24 2012, 08:33:27 UTC
Thank you ♥! I am too liking how the way I handled this, even if it ended up being, and to hear that you got the little details (yes, I tried to write bits and pieces, and they were all actually only bits and pieces, but somehow it gets into Arashi style's bits and pieces... I'm rambling here, sorry! XD), I'm glad! Well, once again, thank you!

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doctoggy November 7 2012, 22:12:57 UTC
Dearest anon:

This was beautiful. I loved recognizing moments of their history, and watching them grow, and then grow together. It was a beautifully woven piece and I envy your ability to say so much in such a short space.

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gomushroom November 24 2012, 08:36:37 UTC
Dearest you:

It's one of the biggest compliments to hear that you recognized the moments and find this beautiful; thank you ♥!

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orange_c_c November 10 2012, 22:34:24 UTC
This is AMAZING and just SO beautiful and ugh, I love how you've worked in all the little details of Arashi's history into this piece, more than a decade's worth of stories and experiences and feelings into condensed into something so full of meaning. Great job, anon author!

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gomushroom November 24 2012, 08:38:23 UTC
Yes, more than a decade (or actually I was trying to limit this to a decade because I can go on and on about this), of Arashi history XD! Thank you for reading and dropping a lovely comment ♥!

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syri_chii November 21 2012, 03:37:41 UTC
Dearest Anon writer,

This is just so sweet and endearing and made me teary and smile all throughout the fic.
Great job! ♥

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gomushroom November 24 2012, 08:40:18 UTC
Dearest you,

Thank you for dropping such a sweet comment; I'm glad to hear that you like this.

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