Some of Them Fell Into Heaven, and Some of Them Fell Into Hell

[semiotic7]

The fucking intro. is done. This is the first scene I wrote for Dead Gods and it is the only one that remains more or less unchanged from the very first draft

Comments

[sadd13man]

Your 100% right that scene rocks. What about opening with that scene and letting those intro scenes go. I want to see this after reading that scene.

[grinnifer]

wow, that's awesome. Hmm. formating. you can use html coding [b]to bold[/b] out parts, and [i]to italizize[/i] parts. just as a refreasher if you need... use the "<" and the ">" instead of the "[" and the "]" Oh, and the [u]underline[/u] is good too. See if that helps.

Good dialoge by the way. that's the part I choke on. Is the vet the Shiva? *slyly suspicious, even though she knows she is wrong...*

[semiotic7]

"Is the vet the Shiva?"

good one, no ones ever said that before.

What I really need to know: is there a way to center text?

Re:

[grinnifer]

yes. {c}using the html "c" to center{/c} again, rembember to replace the { and }with < and >

[semiotic7]

thanks.