Ooh, that was fun. I love the rapid pace of this, the way wildly improbable things just keep coming at them. Things I loved:
And that’s when John knows the Pegasus Galaxy hates him. (I think he might have a point, actually.)
“Practical joke? Booby trap? Party favor for disobedient children? Martial arts training drone? Extreme sports paraphernalia? Let me tell you, Colonel, the more I learn about the Ancients, the less I understand about the Ancients.” I give it 50/50 odds that they will run into the Rabid Ping-Pong Ball From Hell (tm) on the show. And Super Ball cheerfully points out that it has no over-ride protocol was perfect.
“Clearly you have no conception whatsoever of how to lead. Which really isn’t much of a surprise, given your abysmal navigational skills.” God, I want to see this scene. DH and JF tangoing could only be good.
“You have to promise me you’ll make sure Zelenka leaves the lab. You have to personally go and make sure. Follow him to his quarters. Please.” I pictured the earnestness of this statement and
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Thanks! I was trying to balance the angsty with the funny. (That last one is one of my favorites too. I cleverly thought I could get away with John being poetic because he was tripping out on hallucinogens.)
OMG WOW. This is so adorable. Pining!John is possibly my favorite thing ever, so thank you. And Rodney knowing how to dance? Insanely hot. Rodney knowing how to tango? SO INSANELY HOT I CANNOT PUT IT INTO WORDS.
Thanks! I stole a Rodney who knows how to dance from various other fics, but it's something that really appeals to me. Naturally, he was forced to learn as a child, and of course, he's technically perfect...
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And that’s when John knows the Pegasus Galaxy hates him. (I think he might have a point, actually.)
“Practical joke? Booby trap? Party favor for disobedient children? Martial arts training drone? Extreme sports paraphernalia? Let me tell you, Colonel, the more I learn about the Ancients, the less I understand about the Ancients.” I give it 50/50 odds that they will run into the Rabid Ping-Pong Ball From Hell (tm) on the show. And Super Ball cheerfully points out that it has no over-ride protocol was perfect.
“Clearly you have no conception whatsoever of how to lead. Which really isn’t much of a surprise, given your abysmal navigational skills.” God, I want to see this scene. DH and JF tangoing could only be good.
“You have to promise me you’ll make sure Zelenka leaves the lab. You have to personally go and make sure. Follow him to his quarters. Please.” I pictured the earnestness of this statement and ( ... )
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Thank you for writing this.
*glomps fic*
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*faints*
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