FIC: Rails

Mar 01, 2013 09:50

Summary: The boys have to take a train. Sam isn't feeling well.
Characters: Sam, Dean, a quick and unobtrusive OC.
Spoilers: don't worry about it!
Words: 1,468
A/N: This is a sort of giftfic fo madame_naan or being sooo sweet to me while I was sick a few weeks ago and for being a lovely lovely friend. Sorry this is so late!!

Dean notices it before Sam does. He doesn’t say anything, but he picks up a bag of cough drops and a bottle of cold medicine from the drugstore. )

asthma, spn, sick!sam, allergic!sam, cold

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senberet February 2 2013, 03:58:44 UTC
OH MY GODDD thank you so so much! seriously i am so so SO SO glad that you like it and! oh my god! you leave the best comments EVER, wow!! hehe i really really liked writing it because i added in a bunch of stuff that i like because i know it's probably stuff that you like (because every time i read anything of yours it feels like it was personalized to fit with everything i love)! poor sam! he isn't safe from us! (but he also gets the beeessst care in the world~~~)

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greeneyes_fan February 2 2013, 02:45:27 UTC
Aw, SAMMY!!!! I have all the love for this. This totally happened in my head, like, six times.

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senberet February 2 2013, 03:10:57 UTC
ahh! thank you thank you! and me too, oh my god! i'm always thinking up these situations and fantasizing and things and words cannot do my ideas justice! poor poor sam hehehe.

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ladykorana March 6 2013, 23:54:07 UTC
OMG OMG how did I never read this before? It's SOOOOO yummy I don't even have words!

Sick Sammy - my favorite thing ever- AND allergic Sammy - AND asthma Sammy? I might faint from that awesome combo!

And I echo the above comments about all the amazing little details you do SO well! I love Dean being so thoughtful and taking such good care of Sam, and commenting on how he's getting sick, and 'how's your cold?' and knowing what Sam's allergy sneezes and bronchitis coughs sound like. *happy sigh* And that last part where Sam admits he doesn't feel well... totally makes me melt. Please write more sick Sam whenever you want, and I will eat it up! :)

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senberet March 7 2013, 00:05:17 UTC
whaaaat is this comment for real? oh my god! is it my birthday? thank you so much! you are just the sweetest, wow! thank you!

heeee! poor sam, right? right? he's so adorable sick! gosh, i just want to write about it forever!!

and ohhh thank you for such a nice detailed comment oh my god i can't believe you liked all those parts, how sweet! of course dean would know! he's been taking care of sam for sam's whoooole life so he's like, the master of sick/allergic/hurting sam! i love it!

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ladykorana March 7 2013, 00:14:18 UTC
No, thank YOU! Actually, my birthday is this coming Sunday, so reading these fics is like an awesome birthday present for me. :)

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lauehime April 12 2014, 03:39:45 UTC
Awwww that's really too too tooooo sweet! Loved the part where Dean thinks he's been trying to get Sam laid but his brother manages to attract women when he's miserable! lol! But who could resist the puppy dog eyes, right?

And then Dean turns all motherly when Sam starts wheezing, that's really sweet as well! I really like who you depict the way Dean's worried about Sam but also how he takes care of him. When he buys him the medication at first because he knows Sam's getting sick even before Sam does, that's just perfect!

But the sweetest part has to be droopy Sam and Dean completing his sentences. "sleepy, i know. get some rest" :3 makes my heart melt! Bravo !!

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senberet April 12 2014, 03:45:56 UTC
awww, thank you thank you! i can't believe you found this one! there's something about dean having special particular ways to take care of sam that just gets to me, i think. glad you enjoyed it!!!

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lauehime April 12 2014, 03:49:38 UTC
I really did! I had actually read it before and I couldn't believe I hadn't commented on it back then! Shame on me! (It was probably really late) . But mistakes fixed, I'm glad I found this fic AGAIN! It's really amazing and beautifully portrays that very special thing about Dean being such a caring big brother :)

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senberet April 12 2014, 04:01:32 UTC
aww, no worries! i'm glad you did too! definitely my favorite part of the series.

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