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All you native English-speakers in my f-list, I need to hear your opinion!
Feb 17, 2012 17:10
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kita_the_spaz
February 19 2012, 03:46:06 UTC
Talons or claws, either would work well.
"Amused, the red dragon turned the tiny golden box over and over in his nimble talons. I watched as his clever claws quickly ferreted out almost all of the catches on the secret panels, teasing them open."
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senna_chan
February 19 2012, 09:12:09 UTC
Daaaamn, I had completely forgotten the word 'talons'.
I like your example, though. This proved to be a bit more challenging thing to write, since all of you have given me good advice and stuff.
- Senna-chan
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"Amused, the red dragon turned the tiny golden box over and over in his nimble talons. I watched as his clever claws quickly ferreted out almost all of the catches on the secret panels, teasing them open."
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I like your example, though. This proved to be a bit more challenging thing to write, since all of you have given me good advice and stuff.
- Senna-chan
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