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[senri]

Marluxia keeps his gardens exactly as he keeps all his other possessions: well-coiffed. His ornamental cherry trees are groomed like poodles, his gravel paths neatly raked and free from weeds or invasive flora, falling water clinks gently in the air - there are no birds, no sonorous bugs. His is an insulated, a channeled place, not unlike

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[scratchmist]

I love this. It's a great bit of prose, and it communicates so much about these three characters in four short paragraphs. I honestly don't know Org XIII well, because I never played CoM, but stories like this flesh out the characters a lot more for me. I really liked ornamental cherry trees are groomed like poodles and Marluxia who vibrates with private amusement - really well put.

Also, your Naminé icon is lovely. :)

[senri]

Funnily enough this is pretty old, I was just looking through my old backup harddrive and doing my best to pick up everything I could from it since the computer it backed up died. It was really fun to write, though! And I'm still really pleased with the prose and imagery.

♥ And I've had that Naminé icon so long, lol. JUST BECAUSE IT'S SO PRETTY.