HAWAII FIVE-0: that football field out there tonight, that's our universe (Chin/Steve)

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title: that football field out there tonight, that's our universe
fandom: Hawaii five-0
pairing: Chin Ho Kelly/Steve McGarrett
rating: PG-13
summary: Jack McGarrett takes Chin to see his son play. Chin lives every moment of the game as though he were the one playing as starting quarterback, not McGarrett's son.
spoilers/notes: Written for the

Comments

[kare]

I wanted to make sure and tell you here as well how much I love this fic! =D

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Thank you again! :D You're so awesome and supportive. ♥

[tli]

I'm not usually a fan of second person, but I really liked this.

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The second person is definitely something which should be deployed with care, I agree. I'm glad you enjoyed the fic. Thanks for reading and commenting. ♥

[haldoor]

I don't usually read 2nd person, but you've done this well. I'm also a bit of a fan of Steve/Chin, so I'd be happy to see more. Nicely done. ;-)

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I'm really glad you liked it. (: Steve/Chin is definitely an intriguing ship. Thanks for reading and commenting. ♥

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I'm really glad you enjoyed it.
Thanks for reading and commenting. ♥

[antivol]

Loved this. Powerful images, and a very interesting angle (and pairing!). Thanks for this!

[sentential]

I'm so glad you liked it! It was definitely a bit of an experiment. (: Thanks for reading and commenting. ♥