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essence of butterfly | yunjae | prologue/xx

Jan 09, 2011 05:17

Title: Essence of Butterfly
Chapter(s): prologue/?
Author: sentimentalenvy
Genre: action, angst, historical, romance
Rating: R
Warnings: language, tobacco use, violence
Pairing: YunJae
Disclaimer: I do not own any known characters in this story.

Synopsis: The history of two family names collide, clashes and tangle in a way neither is willing to settle. ( Read more... )

p: yunjae, f: essence of butterfly, b: dong bang shin ki, g: k-pop

Comments 29

myfallenmelody January 9 2011, 22:40:56 UTC

Ah, I see. You re-wrote it^^v It's good as always and you're such a tease for not revealing more. Thanks for the post, hun!

sentimentalenvy January 10 2011, 03:42:18 UTC

That I did. ^^ Haha I'm still debating on adding one more scene but there's actually still a lot to think about. But yes, that's what prologues are all about! Thanks for reading!

gunfightings January 10 2011, 01:44:45 UTC

love this!!! ♥ will be waiting for your next update :D

sentimentalenvy January 10 2011, 03:42:47 UTC

Good to know! Thanks for reading and commenting. ^^

ouji January 10 2011, 04:23:01 UTC

I could have sworn you have posted this already? *___* or is my mind deceiving me at this moment? D:

anyway it's good to see that you have posted something! :) can't wait for more! xD

sentimentalenvy January 10 2011, 04:49:14 UTC

There are two versions! I wasn't content with the last one. This one is a revision of the prologue, lol. Thank you! XD

ouji January 10 2011, 05:17:07 UTC

dam you're so good at writing cuz i couldn't even tell the difference! xD unless there wasn't much difference... O__O anyway can't wait for the story to begin... again! xD

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sentimentalenvy January 10 2011, 06:31:49 UTC

If you've read the other one, it's the same. The only difference is that this is now personally in Jaejoong's POV and you get to get more of a feel from his side, lol. At first I planned on linking it to the old version but I figured it was pointless since I'm going to delete it later.

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sentimentalenvy January 12 2011, 08:05:00 UTC

For this fic, there has only been the one prologue. ^^ Maybe it's another one of my fics that you've read? ^_^ Yeah, those things that happened hasn't changed and it's still part of the fic. @@

youinmyjumpsuit January 11 2011, 14:58:36 UTC

love it still! <3

there's a deeper impression and feeling this prologue gave. i think the intensity of the words just makes readers more curious.

sentimentalenvy January 12 2011, 07:58:49 UTC

I'm so glad to hear it!! I've been so out of the loop lately. It's difficult, haha! I'm really trying to shift towards that as well. D: Thanks for reading! :D