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Absence Makes...? - Katef, PattRose and Mella68

Nov 10, 2017 06:00

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pattrose November 10 2017, 06:09:37 UTC

Kate, I Love what you did with the story idea I had. That's why I love giving ideas to you. YOu always do so much more with them than I ever could. Great job.

Mella68, the art is just stunning.

pattrose November 10 2017, 07:16:44 UTC

Thanks, Patt. it was great material to work with, so I'm glad you like the finished story! And I agree, Mella's artwork is beautiful!

Kate x

franscats November 10 2017, 14:14:15 UTC

Wonderful story. Blair as a consultant was perfect. I was happy to see him accepted by the PD. And, of course, Blair would feel for Lewinsky because he is so empathic.

Mella 68, I loved your artwork. It perfectly complimented the story and was beautiful and haunting at the same time.

Great Job Everyone!

franscats November 10 2017, 16:53:22 UTC

Thanks, Fran. I really enjoyed working with Patt's idea, and I totally agree with you about Mella's artwork.

Kate x

bluewolf458 November 11 2017, 10:20:28 UTC

A really interesting idea well developed.

Nice artwork, Mella

bluewolf458 November 11 2017, 16:40:57 UTC

Thanks, Sheila. It was a challenge, but one I was so pleased to take on. Patt has some great ideas, and I'm just grateful that she shares them with me. Love Mella's artwork also,

Kate x

bluewolf458 November 11 2017, 19:14:44 UTC

Doesn't she just! I'm working (slooooowly) on one she threw my way a while ago.

magician114 November 11 2017, 13:43:38 UTC

I'm not sure what the original idea was, because there are quite a few in here, but you developed them all very well. The twist of the bad guy was pretty darn twisty and original--how could anyone have guessed? Fortunately, Blair and Jim have a lot of support for their professional and personal lives.

Mella, you artwork was lovely. Each piece represented such a big piece of the story. The one where the policeman finds Blair is especially effective--using the blue evoked the cold and wet he was feeling--it almost made me shiver in sympathy!

Great job ladies. Great collaboration.

magician114 November 11 2017, 16:47:06 UTC

Thanks, Regina. I really enjoy working with Patt's ideas because they so often merge so nicely with ones I might be toying with, but not really developing. It's the perfect incentive for me to keep writing even when I'm feeling lazy, so I'm very grateful to her for the added push! :))

And Mella's artwork was perfect too.

Kate x

marizilda November 15 2017, 17:21:53 UTC

Hi : ) Great story, I love to read. ♥

marizilda November 16 2017, 10:35:58 UTC

Thank you so much for taking the time to let me know. So glad you enjoyed the story,

Kate x