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pattrose November 11 2017, 06:19:27 UTC
Fran, I Have company in town and three thousand things going on. So anyhow, I"m going to read tomorrow if I can. Or Sunday. I didn't want you to think I"m ignoring you.

Hugs, Patt

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franscats November 11 2017, 23:26:27 UTC
Patt,

I hope you enjoy the story.

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pattrose November 12 2017, 07:28:45 UTC
I made the time tonight. What a wonderful story. Blair was such a helpful, giving guide and Jim sure didn't know what to do with one like that did he? I really, really liked all the characters, whether they were good or bad. Excellent writing. As always, another story that I loved from you. My favorite part was the happy ending and the last two sentences. Thanks for the good read.

Kiki, I loved the two pieces of artwork. While the cover had everything to do with the story, the ending piece had to do with the last two sentences in the story. It was beautiful.

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franscats November 12 2017, 23:40:19 UTC
Patt, I'm glad you enjoyed the story and I agree with you, Kiki's art was beautiful.

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unbelievable2 November 11 2017, 10:03:43 UTC
Excellent story, Fran! You've incorporated canon in a fresh new way and given us a very intriguing story. Great characterisations, and a great read! And I love the sudden, but yet so perfect, ending.

Kiki, your art work is gorgeous. Both quite different, but both full of emotion.

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franscats November 11 2017, 23:24:12 UTC
I'm glad you liked the way the story ended. I agree Kiki's art was gorgeous. Thanks for commenting.

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lapetite_kiki November 13 2017, 14:30:05 UTC
I went out of my comfort zone to make the cover, and I’m pretty pleased with it. :-)

The final piece was felt just right, I love to work with Blair and Jim in love!

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bluewolf458 November 11 2017, 10:14:20 UTC
I really, really like this one. Well done!

Kiki, great artwork.

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franscats November 11 2017, 23:25:25 UTC
Thank you - and thank you for being a great beta.

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lapetite_kiki November 13 2017, 14:30:37 UTC
Thank you, I’m happy that you enjoy them!

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anonymous November 11 2017, 13:55:39 UTC
Great story, Fran. Really enjoyed the plot, and the sympathetic way you described the growing relationship between Jim and Blair. A soul bond indeed. Also really loved the gorgeous artwork, Kiki. Thank you both,

Kate x

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franscats November 11 2017, 23:25:59 UTC
Thank you for the comment. I'm glad you liked the story.

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lapetite_kiki November 13 2017, 14:31:17 UTC
Thanks for the compliment! I’m pleased that you loved my arts! I had a great inspiring story to work with!

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magician114 November 12 2017, 19:03:04 UTC
Wow, Fran. That was jam-packed with interesting original characters, great use of canon characters, lots of suspects that kept solving the case surprising and a few new twists on the sentinel/guides are known genre. Very inventive and enjoyable.

Kiki, lovely artwork that took in both sides of the story: the police case and the JIm/Blair relationship.

Brava, ladies. You each did an excellent job.

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franscats November 12 2017, 23:41:10 UTC
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

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lapetite_kiki November 13 2017, 14:31:47 UTC
Thank you!
The wonderful story gave me a lot to work with for the cover, I’m just glad that I was able to put it together in a coherent way for a cover, since I’m not used to make them.

As for the ending art, that was totally in my playfield, I sure enjoyed working with them.
Thanks for your comment!

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