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bluewolf458 November 12 2017, 11:35:56 UTC
Great selection of challenges for Blair (and Jim) and nice to see a supportive William. Well done.

Aly, great to see artwork from you. It complements the story beautifully.

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pattrose November 13 2017, 02:51:11 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you so much for the beta. :) I loved Aly's work too. It's nice to see her doing art again.

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anonymous November 12 2017, 11:59:51 UTC
Oh my, Patt! What a rollercoaster of angst - but lots of lovely comfort too. Jim and so many of Blair's friends were there to support him - bar his mom, that is. But his own inner strength is what really pulls him through.

Thank you for a gripping read! And I loved Aly's artwork too.

Thank you both,

Kate x

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pattrose November 13 2017, 02:51:45 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you so much for reading and leaving the kind comment. :)

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unbelievable2 November 12 2017, 18:29:39 UTC
Wow, they both went through the wringer with this one, but a nice happy ending nonetheless. :))
Great story, Patt!
And lovely artwork from Alyjude!

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pattrose November 13 2017, 02:52:31 UTC
I wanted some angst, but with a happy ending and I think it worked. Thank you so much for reading. :)

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franscats November 12 2017, 23:38:58 UTC
Patt, a lovely story. I like that Jim and Blair were there for each other through the whole story and all the problems they faced.

Alyjude your art was beautiful and enhanced the story.

Great Job both of you.

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pattrose November 13 2017, 02:53:23 UTC
Thank you so much, Fran. I really liked this story. I don't like all of mine, but I did like this one. :)

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magician114 November 14 2017, 15:56:57 UTC
Patt, Blair definitely had his share of challenges in your story, but his challenges were shared by his friends and loved ones.. It doesn't always make it easier, but it definitely eases the burden to have that support. Very nice to see William as a great father-in-law. It was great that they ended up with so much happiness.

Aly, the coloring on the artwork was so lovely. The gold surrounding Blair in bed was ethereal and very poignant. It looked as if he could have just slipped away into it.

Brava, ladies. An excellent collaboration.

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pattrose November 15 2017, 02:48:17 UTC
Thank you, Regina. I really liked writing this story and am glad that some of you have read it and liked it. :)

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