round 01, challenge four: results
round 01, challenge four: elimination
#o1 (-02) The Pact by nobetterpicture
round 01, challenge four: people's choice
#o2 (+02) For All The Darkness by countingcolors
round 01, challenge four: tallies
Round One, challenge four
o1. The Pact by nobetterpicture
o2. For All The Darkness by countingcolors
o3. Sing me a lullabye so I can sleep by actreact
round 01, challenge four: elimination comments
#01 - irregular tense and lack of clear resolution.
#01 - Whilst I enjoyed the fic, I found that the use of second person actually detracted from the overall feeling of the fic; there was too much use of 'you' that it became noticeable and distracting, and actually removed me from the emotion, rather than bringing it closer.
#01 - i couldn't relate to the characters because of the 2nd person pov.
#02 - The author was limited by the word count. It was a really interesting premise, but the first two thirds of the fic felt like a summary.
#03 - Good possible future fic, but not sure how it tied in with the prompt and the characterization felt a bit flat.
round 01, challenge four: favorite comments
#01 - There were several moods in this fic, but the transitions were good between each of them.
#02 - unexpected premise.
#02 - such an interesting premise
#02 - Images were beautiful and the main character had a very strong presence in the story from start to finish. It flowed really well and was a very nice read
#03 - I can't judge the characterisation, as I'm not familiar enough with the fandom, but I felt the emotions displayed in the fic, and enjoyed reading the slow progression of events from Nicole's point of view.
theramenshop and mandarinorange have one skip remaining. rerouting skipped this challenge. downtoyourbone, gdgdbaby and choksu have been disqualified from the challenge for using an "extra skip".