I'm sitting next to you as you wait for your train, Checking my watch An unseasonable snow is falling "I guess this is the last snow I'll see in Tokyo," you mutter, your voice seeming lonely
Even the lingering snow knows when to fall, After our lighthearted season has ended Now, spring has come, and you've become beautiful Even more beautiful than last year
As the train begins to move, your face appears in the window You're calling out for something Your lips move in the shape of 'goodbye' Frightened, I lower my eyes
I didn't realize that as time marches on, Even childish you will become an adult Now, spring has come, and you've become beautiful Even more beautiful than last year
I was left behind on the platform you departed from Watching the snow fall and then melt away Now, spring has come, and you've become beautiful Even more beautiful than last year
Re: traces of snow, woohyun/sungjong
anonymous
August 14 2012, 06:29:33 UTC
oh, this is so sweet and poignant. <3 i love how hopeful this is: while sad, obviously, the reluctant acceptance, assurance and maturity in woohyun's pov paints a far more meaningful picture than something wholly more angsty.
you've definitely opened my eyes to a pairing i previously haven't taken notice of.
(and thanks for the brutal realisation none of the group have enlisted for their compulsory military duty yet. D:)
oh!! i certainly wasn't expecting this pairing but wow, it works really well -- very appropriate. you captured the spirit of the song so nicely. ♥ ♥ ♥ thank you so much!! ; 3;
Re: traces of snow, woohyun/sungjong
anonymous
October 7 2012, 23:12:16 UTC
oh anon, this was so pretty. the muted feeling of it all, the sheen of woohyun's feelings, and i love your sungjong, he's just how i imagine him. i hope you write more :)
I'm sitting next to you as you wait for your train,
Checking my watch
An unseasonable snow is falling
"I guess this is the last snow I'll see in Tokyo,"
you mutter, your voice seeming lonely
Even the lingering snow knows when to fall,
After our lighthearted season has ended
Now, spring has come, and you've become beautiful
Even more beautiful than last year
As the train begins to move, your face appears in the window
You're calling out for something
Your lips move in the shape of 'goodbye'
Frightened, I lower my eyes
I didn't realize that as time marches on,
Even childish you will become an adult
Now, spring has come, and you've become beautiful
Even more beautiful than last year
I was left behind on the platform you departed from
Watching the snow fall and then melt away
Now, spring has come, and you've become beautiful
Even more beautiful than last year
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you've definitely opened my eyes to a pairing i previously haven't taken notice of.
(and thanks for the brutal realisation none of the group have enlisted for their compulsory military duty yet. D:)
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