Re: loving out of line [1/5]
anonymous
July 11 2012, 02:20:52 UTC
“This is Sehun,” Jongin says, and Baekhyun pulls the towel back from over his eyes and leaves it hanging on his head when he reaches his hand out
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loving out of line [4/5]
anonymous
July 11 2012, 02:23:00 UTC
After a moment, Baekhyun says, “Yeah.” The crickets start then, quiet at first, but melding into one long, loud chirp that has Baekhyun pausing to think about what to say next. “It's him, and our whole friendship, and everything. It's not as easy as you think
( ... )
loving out of line [5/5]
anonymous
July 11 2012, 02:25:06 UTC
Baekhyun wakes up the next morning, to cloud coverage, cloudy but light-light white-gray, and when he shuffles downstairs, Sehun is already up and sitting at the table, glancing through the activity binder Jongin's parents leave for the guests when they rent the cabin out in the later summer.
“So,” Sehun says, not looking up, “I confessed to you yesterday hoping that we could spend some time together before we leave.”
Baekhyun sighs and runs a hand through his hair, eyes still squinted from the early morning light. “Sehun, can we not-”
“That would make for an awkward couple of days.”
Baekhyun jumps and turns, and Jongin is behind them, a white v-neck twisted over his torso and boxers pulled pulled low over his hips and his eyes squinted, too, and lips puffy, and Baekhyun can't help giving him a pitying smile, flicking his shoulder. “What are you doing up so early-”
“Look, Baekhyun,” Jongin says, his voice thick but oddly serious. “I thought about-about that last night, and I'm willing to give it a try
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Re: loving out of line [5/5]
anonymous
July 11 2012, 02:29:50 UTC
not op, but anon, this is wonderful. i wish i knew who you were so i could track down everything you write. it's just quiet enough that the little bits of hard, sharp emotions stand out even more -- baekhyun's jealousy, sehun's awkwardness, jongin's "my pace" way of doing everything. i love your dialogue and the little details (baekhyun waving his hand in sehun's lap for the popcorn was one of my favorites) and wahhhhh i hope you i find you again elsewhere in the fandom. thank you so much for writing this. *____*
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“So,” Sehun says, not looking up, “I confessed to you yesterday hoping that we could spend some time together before we leave.”
Baekhyun sighs and runs a hand through his hair, eyes still squinted from the early morning light. “Sehun, can we not-”
“That would make for an awkward couple of days.”
Baekhyun jumps and turns, and Jongin is behind them, a white v-neck twisted over his torso and boxers pulled pulled low over his hips and his eyes squinted, too, and lips puffy, and Baekhyun can't help giving him a pitying smile, flicking his shoulder. “What are you doing up so early-”
“Look, Baekhyun,” Jongin says, his voice thick but oddly serious. “I thought about-about that last night, and I'm willing to give it a try ( ... )
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you portrayed everything perfectly. i wish i could see more of your works ;~;
thank you for filling this
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oh my god just all of this omfg
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