Dawnficathon entry

[septembergrrl]

Here 'tis. I will say that the fluff requirement was WAY harder for this pairing than an angst requirement would have been, but I hope I delivered

Comments

[debg]

LJ, this was *fun*, damnit! Very likeable voices and a nice slice of their lives.

[septembergrrl]

Thanks. Fun is good :-).

[toronto_gal]

Hi there! Hopefully I'm not imposing - due to skulking through the Dawn-ficathon I chanced upon your neat entry.

So I just wanted to pop in and say that it was a really enjoyable piece of work. It was neat seeing Dawn and Connor interacting with a child - especially since both of them were once the youngest members of their respective groups. So it's interesting seeing them in a maternal/paternal role - usually they're on the opposite end of a mother/father dynamic.

I also liked the neat subtle touches. Like the Watcher family naming their child Quentin... since the head watcher is named 'Quentin Travers', I thought that was apropos. Oh - and it was neat how Connor still had some lingering rebellion against his father, even with the mind-wipe.

All-in-all, I really enjoyed this piece of work - it had a nice relaxing tone, as well as neat portrayals of the characters. Great work!

Take care,
- Allyson

[septembergrrl]

Hi Allyson,

You aren't imposing at all! I'm glad you liked the story. Quentin was kind of named for Quentin Travers.

[viciouswishes]

Excellent Dawn. I really liked how she saw the family resemblance in Connor.

[septembergrrl]

Thanks! How did you fnd the story?

[viciouswishes]

I had the masterlist for the ficathon in my 'to read' bookmarks that I slowly go through.

[septembergrrl]

Cool, glad you enjoyed!