Fredficathon entry

[septembergrrl]

Title: Some Girls
Author: Elisabeth
Summary: Nail polish is a girl's best friend. Fred/Harmony, Angel S5.
A/N: Written for hellmouthhoney for the Fredficathon. Thanks to sj, chicating and sophiap for the betas

Comments

[_swallow]

This is great!

[septembergrrl]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

[ros_fod]

Goodness this was wonderful. Your Harmony-voice is perfect - vapid yet self-aware enough to be insecure, eager to please, yet easily bored, seeking a connection and not really finding one.

And I loved all the little details in this - especially the way you made Fred's lab what it would really have been like, sticky and cluttered, none of that overly-polished sheen of network TV. :-)

Lovely.

[septembergrrl]

Thanks. Harmony was an interesting character to write from the POV of, because her perspective is slightly skewed. (I tried this from Fred's POV first, but it didn't work. her head is harder to get into, apparently.)

I appreciate your feedback!

[proudduckling]

Ooh, yay! I love Harmony.

[septembergrrl]

Thanks, i'm glad you liked it!

[satiresqueen]

Thank you so much. *grins* I loved it. I love how you made Harm not just a vapid character and made Fred a little girly at times. :)

[septembergrrl]

Yay, I'm so glad it made you happy!

[satiresqueen]

*grins* you did, on a very very hard day, so thank you even more. :)

[idyll]

This is great. I love Harmony trying, but not pulling it off in the right way. And Fred being distracted. Great Harmony voice. So jealous of the great Harmony voice.

[septembergrrl]

Thank you! Harmony was a fun POV to write from.