Truth? Neither did I initially, but their world always worked in interesting ways and the timing worked for me... if the airdate for Roulette can be trusted.
Thank you. I'm so glad to know that. The epilogue, with any luck, will be up tomorrow night.
“Tonight, we do this on our own terms, not theirs. I can handle whatever they throw my way because you know all of my skeletons. And I think I know all of yours.”
“You do.”
This sentence contains all that they have created together Chloe and Ollie during the months of their relationship. Mutual knowledge trust, security, understanding and love! It 'wonderful to see the ease with which they interact with each other and the awareness that he no longer anything to hide from others. I am in the classical phase "no one can stop us!"
Everything else was great fun, the characters you've created are stuck perfectly in this story. Ian, Matt, Leah, Ronnie and also Betty, are simply delicious.
That's the interesting part of their journey, the understanding of each other's character, strengths and faults. It's one of the things that is so essential to Chlollie, no matter the universe, so I'm glad that you highlighted that aspect of their relationship.
However, the fact that you love the original characters is just a bonus for me. I always enjoy expanding their social circle, but creating characters that people will love is tough. That compliment means more to me than you know.
I'll miss writing this story, to be honest, but I'm glad you've enjoyed it that much. Thank you :)
This chapter was amazing, I have my heart that beats so strong and this stupid smile on my face, the first public date was beautiful, and OMG the kiss on the red carpet ... and the last scene between them, so sweet and passionate, it's amazing how when they are together they manage to isolate themselves in their happy bubble as if they were the only ones with no one else around. Thank you so much I can't wait for the epilogue :)
I will always appreciate knowing that my writing leads to smiles, so thanks for that! I did want to make sure that I covered their first public night out, but I love writing them in their bubble... which you'll see in the epilogue, which I'm hoping to post tomorrow. Thanks again for the feedback here though, I hope you like the ending!
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Great chapter!! I love this fic and I will miss it a lot.
Can't wait to read the epilogue.
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Thank you. I'm so glad to know that. The epilogue, with any luck, will be up tomorrow night.
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“You do.”
This sentence contains all that they have created together Chloe and Ollie during the months of their relationship.
Mutual knowledge trust, security, understanding and love!
It 'wonderful to see the ease with which they interact with each other and the awareness that he no longer anything to hide from others.
I am in the classical phase "no one can stop us!"
Everything else was great fun, the characters you've created are stuck perfectly in this story.
Ian, Matt, Leah, Ronnie and also Betty, are simply delicious.
You have no idea how much I will miss this story.
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However, the fact that you love the original characters is just a bonus for me. I always enjoy expanding their social circle, but creating characters that people will love is tough. That compliment means more to me than you know.
I'll miss writing this story, to be honest, but I'm glad you've enjoyed it that much. Thank you :)
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Thank you so much I can't wait for the epilogue :)
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:)
Their celebration was so sweet
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