Comments | serafina19: The Longer You Run (29/29)

serafina19

The Longer You Run (29/29)

Apr 01, 2014 22:15

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fanfiction, title: the longer you run, oliver queen, chloe sullivan, multi-chapter, smallville

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serafina19 April 7 2014, 05:09:04 UTC

Wow! You've re-read it already? Thank you so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

kachica April 3 2014, 00:13:09 UTC

It´s a great way to end it. I really enjoyed this fic, Sera.

serafina19 April 7 2014, 05:09:30 UTC

Thanks Keiko! I'm glad to know that :)

brittany2922 April 3 2014, 05:06:15 UTC

This was an absolutely amazing story. Loved every minute of it. Your writing was always awesome but this story blew me away. :)

serafina19 April 7 2014, 05:10:18 UTC

Hey! This is a nice surprise. Thanks for taking the time to read this. I admit, it was fun to write and I'm glad you enjoyed it so much!

chlollifan84 April 3 2014, 09:05:17 UTC

Thank you for this great journey, for taking us for you.
This fic is amazing, I loved it so much I've already read it twice.
I hope you'll keep writing Chlollie, I'm never going to get tired of your beautiful writing.

serafina19 April 7 2014, 05:12:03 UTC

Thank you! I'm incredibly flattered that you've read this twice already. Knowing that means more to me than you know.

That said, I do have a few things in progress that should be coming up soon. I'm glad that you're not getting tired of my stuff yet ;)

escapist90 April 3 2014, 15:22:08 UTC

I totally agree with scout09, I love that Oliver was having doubts (and yes, that doesn't mean he loves Chloe any less) and that the three words were never said/stated.

Because, they are still at the beginning of their official relationsip so they need to adjust and there is no need to rush things. The last two sentences state that beautifully.

Fave moment :

“I’m not leaving the car until you do.”
Leaning towards her, Oliver whispered into her ear. “I may not mind this arrangement.”
Chloe’s eyebrows rose at that comment, noticing how his stare had darkened significantly. However, as tempting as that particular offer was, she knew this wasn’t the place.
“With Lois watching and tapping on the windows?” she asked, causing Oliver to laugh as his face pulled away from her.

I really enjoyed this fic. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. :)

serafina19 April 7 2014, 05:16:43 UTC

As I told scout09, not writing those three words was a conscious decision. I'm glad both of you agree with that decision, because it was an important part of writing this fic in the first place.

Hee! I love that moment in the car too. Even with his doubts, Oliver is still Oliver.

Thanks so much for your feedback! I really appreciate it :)