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serafina19

In Front of Me (1/1)

Aug 05, 2015 22:42

Author: serafina19
Title: In Front of Me
Timeline: Nine months after “Warrior,” but AU from that episode.
Rating: PG-13
Dedication: This is a very belated birthday fic for scout09.

( Every now and then, they needed this. A night to relax, a night to remember that taking care of themselves was just as much as important as everyone else. )

fanfiction, oliver queen, chloe sullivan, one-shot, title: in front of me, smallville

Comments 25

faby87 August 6 2015, 10:33:02 UTC

I loved it, thak you so much !!
I'm looking for your next update -:)

serafina19 August 8 2015, 17:37:22 UTC

No problem, thank you! Hoping to post more soon.

meetin4 August 7 2015, 21:22:11 UTC

Chloe is being Chloe but happy that Oliver wouldn't give up on it! It's beautiful and love it. This is also like a special weekend treat for me. Thank you so much!

serafina19 August 8 2015, 17:37:55 UTC

Yeah, he's pretty persistent. Thanks so much for your feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

scout09 August 7 2015, 21:35:36 UTC

Aw, you posted it, thank you! Best birthday present ever. :) I'll be back later with more, but just know that I love this to pieces. <3<3<3

serafina19 August 8 2015, 17:38:52 UTC

I sure did. After seeing your response, I figured why not. So happy that you like it as much as you do and I'm looking forward to your further thoughts :)

scout09 August 8 2015, 20:00:07 UTC

Apparently I cannot edit my comment after a reply, so - new comment it is ( ... )

serafina19 August 15 2015, 01:34:50 UTC

Well, these are mature people and like you, it drives me nuts when writers make their characters momentarily dumb/irrational. See, I could make Dinah bitchy, but she stayed with the team after what happened between her and Oliver, which means there was still a level of respect there.

Ha! I love making that bubble, so I'm always glad to know that you like it too :)

I like what you say about the realness here. Because as a writer, you want to find the right line, but that's the funny things about life. Sometimes, you say dumb thing because you say dumb things, not for "plot purposes."

So thank you! It means so much that you enjoyed this piece, as I never would have finished this without you having a birthday :) (And I'll get to your email either today or tomorrow, but know how much I appreciated it)

watcharrow August 8 2015, 03:38:32 UTC

miss them so much ;( but thanks to keep on writting about them and make me dream <3

serafina19 August 8 2015, 17:39:19 UTC

I do too, but I keep writing when I can. I'm glad you liked this!

noellesullivan August 8 2015, 22:13:29 UTC

Thanks for this beautiful fic :)

serafina19 August 15 2015, 01:27:21 UTC

You're welcome!