Comments | serafina19: Someone Will be Waiting for You (1/1)

serafina19

Someone Will be Waiting for You (1/1)

Jan 16, 2016 14:46

Author: serafina19
Title: Someone Will be Waiting for You
Summary: With what they did, relationships weren’t easy. But in time, a beam of hope appears.
Rating: PG
Timeline: Starts at Justice -> early S7 (pre-Cure and pre-Siren respectively) -> Salvation/ Lazarus -> post-Isis -> Collateral
Scribbles: As the timeline implies, this one jumps around, and I'm ( Read more... )

title: someone will be waiting for you, fanfiction, oliver queen, chloe sullivan, one-shot, smallville

Comments 15

emeraldarrows January 16 2016, 22:42:02 UTC

Lovely!

serafina19 January 24 2016, 22:23:30 UTC

Thanks!

artgirltx January 16 2016, 23:51:24 UTC

I especially loved the bit about Oliver riding the subway....

serafina19 January 24 2016, 22:24:30 UTC

I have a soft spot for that part too. It was something I always thought about exploring. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

voz_76 January 17 2016, 02:10:19 UTC

No matter how long or short your fics, your words always resonate. Wonderful snippet!

serafina19 January 24 2016, 22:25:12 UTC

Aw, thank you! I'm glad to have a sort of writing rhythm again and I'm happy this turned out well.

teamolicity123 January 17 2016, 08:49:31 UTC

Naww *sniffles* I just really enjoyed reading this fic, thank you :)

serafina19 January 24 2016, 22:25:35 UTC

Excellent! I'm glad to know that. Thanks for you comment.

scout09 January 17 2016, 17:28:02 UTC

Can I share something with you? I'm not even finished reading and I had to come tell you this. So, I just read the part where Chloe goes to the Earth station and let's face it, we've all seen/read about/thought about these scenes more than is probably healthy and this was the first time I'd ever said to myself Hey, that was an incredibly dangerous thing for Chloe to do. Oliver would be pissed. The first time ever! Even though it seems so obvious. And then you drop this line:

Oliver would lecture her for venturing out in the middle of a war to get the sunglasses. WEIRDNESS. :)

Okay, so back to the beginning. I was happy to see the bits from earlier seasons from you. It was a treat to see you venturing into their respective headspaces a little earlier in the timeline. And you nailed both of them, especially Chloe:

she was so good at lying to Jimmy that she started not recognizing herself in their relationship. Loved this because I found her hard to recognize as Chloe when she was with Jimmy. Like you said, I think she felt their ( ... )

serafina19 January 24 2016, 22:32:29 UTC

Not going to lie, this was the first time that crossed my mind too. I had written that part, but I had actually forgotten how she had accessed the feed. I had to re-watch the scene to confirm that she went to Earth station ( ... )