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serafina19

Close Call (1/1)

Dec 24, 2016 14:49

Author: serafina19
Title: Close Call
Rating: PG
Summary: Oliver catches his son trying to see Santa on Christmas.

Scribbles: This is slightly AU for two reasons. I never read all of the comics and I got in the habit of calling their son Carter, and I don’t feel like changing that now. Also, I think there is a Santa-related episode that contradicts this ( Read more... )

fanfiction, oliver queen, chloe sullivan, title: close call, one-shot, smallville

Comments 13

malugargula December 25 2016, 00:58:58 UTC

Absolutely amazing
Merry Christmas to you and yours :)
Tks for the gift :)

serafina19 January 10 2017, 05:03:39 UTC

Apologies for taking so long to reply to this, but I hope you had a great holiday season! I'm glad you liked this.

artgirltx December 25 2016, 04:13:25 UTC

What a great Christmas gift! A Chlollie family fic for Christmas Eve. I never get enough.

serafina19 January 10 2017, 05:04:21 UTC

I know it's taken forever for me to reply, but I want to thank you for this. I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading this!

escapist90 December 25 2016, 15:06:25 UTC

Cute fic. Thanks for sharing.

Happy Holidays! :)

serafina19 January 10 2017, 05:05:19 UTC

A delayed response on my part, but you're welcome and thanks for the holiday wishes! I'm hoping that you had a great Christmas.

scout09 December 25 2016, 15:15:48 UTC

Seconded! Thanks for the Christmas present! This was so incredibly heartwarming. I loved how much Carter was like both of his parents. I know you didn't read the comics, but there's a panel where C and O are hoping their child doesn't inherit their thirst for danger and kind of look at each other and go "We are so doomed". This reminded me of that. As he looked back up at Oliver, he gave his father a look that Oliver had seen a fair amount from Chloe. “Wait, why are you up?” Loved this part especially because I can totally picture AMack doing that

I hear you on the kid's name. I understand why he was given the name he was, but realistically Chlollie wouldn't name their kid that. Of all the alternatives I've seen, I like Carter the best. It makes the most sense and I like it. :)

Merry Christmas, Sera! Thanks so much for this - it made my Christmas morning!

serafina19 January 10 2017, 05:08:10 UTC

I'm so glad it made your Christmas morning, especially this one-shot was the epitome of a happy accident. I'm hoping you had a great holiday!

Hee! That's a perfect panel and so them. I'm so glad that you see that as a Chloe-like line because I wrote that line and AMack's face popped in my head. I couldn't not put that.

meetin4 December 26 2016, 21:25:05 UTC

Wonderful Chlollie family Xmas story! They're so adorable. Love it, love them. Thank you.
Sorry, I'm too late for Christmas wishes but wishing you a very happy New Year Sera!

serafina19 January 10 2017, 05:09:05 UTC

Well, if you're late, then I'm really late. Regardless, I want to thank you for your comment and for your holiday wishes. Wishing you a happy new year as well!