SG-1 - Captivity (part six)

[serafine_fic]

Header in part one.

Title: Captivity
Author: serafine

Rated: Teen

Summary: Carter falls behind on a mission.

Disclaimer: I do not own Stargate or any of these canon characters. No copyright infringement intended. No foul, no profit, no sue.

Previous bits:
Part one 
Part two 
Part three
Part four
Part five

Comments

[gunhilda]

Oh, I really liked this. Thanks so much for finishing it!!!

[serafine_fic]

:D
Thank you - I am so glad it's done. It just seemed that once I got her home, all the energy ran out...

Now, I just need to decide if I'm going to post it to an archive. If so, which one?

[iwrite4fun]

I really hope that you post this somewhere else besides here! It was too good of a story not to share with other people! I would suggest FanFiction.net because I know that is probably where the majority of the fic I read nowadays gets posted, but regardless of what you decide, please do share this with other people!

[serafine_fic]

Thank you! I am so glad you enjoyed it. It was difficult to finish - the hurt was easy, the comfort kind of a problem. :)
I have a few accounts here and there - Heliopolis, almost for sure. I guess I could create an account at FF.net. I am also not sure if this qualifies for one of the Sam/Jack sites...

[serafine_fic]

Thank you for reading and thank you for the compliment! :) This was very freeing to complete. This is the longest thing I have ever written by far.
Annerbhp and gunhilda's stories were totally my inspiration for the torture scenes.

[aelfgyfu_mead]

I found this story (novella?) through sg1_debrief, and I'm glad I did. You've done an excellent job with a complicated story. The structure worked very well, and the characterization is very strong. I could easily believe Jack lashing out at everyone who wasn't on SG-1-especially the doctor who gave Daniel meds that didn't work for him. His frustration came across well without being overdone. Daniel and Teal'c tried to ground him, but there's only so much they could do. I did like that he didn't lash out at them, and he did his best to work Daniel out of his guilt.

Sam is even better: trying to do math to resist not only torture but drugs, attacking the Jaffa every time she could-sg_fignewton pointed out in a discussion of another episode just a few days ago that despite the use of the trope for others in fanfic, Sam is the one who really wakes up fighting when she has been captured and uses every weapon she has. Of course she would feel guilty and ashamed, and the fact that Morrigan doesn't believe her wouldn't automatically alleviate those feelings. She

[serafine_fic]

*happy dance* I cannot tell you how much this meant to me today. This was the first thing I read when I popped onto the internet and I had a job interview today - this just made me feel so good. *ahem*

Thank you so much for your very kind words. I am so glad you enjoyed this. I tried very hard for everyone to stay in character and make it a natural progression. This story actually grew out of a what if I thought of for the "day of indulgence" comm a few years back. I realized that we had never seen Sam experience the sarcophagus and it just sort of spiraled out of control...

Thank you for reading all of it and giving me such wonderful and specific feedback. I really appreciate it. I hope you have a great day!!

[kaycross]

I found the story to be very well thought out and true to the character voices. I could 'see' this happening - you nailed the right amount of emotion and interaction. Well done. :)

[serafine_fic]

Thank you so much!!!
The idea hit me years ago and it took me forever to finish this. I kind of struggled with the ending. It seemed to be easy to write the hurt and difficult to figure how far to take the comfort. I seem to be most comfortable staying within the framework of the canon. :)
I appreciate your comment - have a wonderful day!