The Seventh Faerie: Chapter One

[seramercury]

Fic title: The Seventh Faerie
Author name: seramercury
Artist name: tzeni17
Genre: Het, AU
Pairing: Dean/Jo
Rating: R
Word count: 20,154 words
Warnings: language, violence, implied sexual assault
Summary: Dean Winchester and Jo Harvelle have finally found happiness--together. The Yellow-Eyed Demon is dead and things are starting to feel normal for a change.

Comments

[khaleesi]

This is really good! I like how you kept the characters with their personalities from the show. Great job!

I noticed a typo though: "Just close your eyes and take a few deep breaths. Sam and I are going to take of you now, darlin'."

I think you left out: care: in that sentence. :) I'll keep reading the rest of the story when I get a chance. Lots of crap has been going on lately and I don't seem to have a lot of time to read. T_T

[seramercury]

Thank you so much for your comments! It really means a lot to me. I will go fix that right away!

Take your time, it's a lot of words! LOL!! XD

When things are not so crazy for you, let me know! We have to hook up! :)