Comments | seraphialsinner: Scars don't heal.

seraphialsinner

Scars don't heal.

Aug 21, 2011 14:40

Scars don’t heal. (A KojiYuu Fanfic ( Read more... )

#fic

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beta [1/?] paint_asmile August 21 2011, 08:03:56 UTC

Kojiharu and Yuko were the best of friends since they joined akb ( ... )

Re: beta [2/?] paint_asmile August 21 2011, 08:06:17 UTC

After Yuko cried her eyes dry, she applied extra make up to try to ( ... )

Re: beta [3/3] paint_asmile August 21 2011, 08:09:46 UTC

"You are filled to the brim with positivity. You're always smiling ( ... )

Re: beta [3/3] paint_asmile August 21 2011, 08:10:16 UTC

-"I SOARED BUT YOU MADE ME PLUMMET." this seemed kinda awkward but idk how to change ;_____;
-oh! and if you want to use '...' remember they always come in threes. like a threesome or sth like that.
- and keep your "/" and '/' consistant as well.
-OTL i seem kinda strict.. but yeah D: I love your fic btw!
-oh yeah, try stalking fic metas and ffas. you really learn alot u.u

YEAHHHHH. :D