Anderson and Shelby prose-bits

[seraravi]

For my CW class, I wrote a short story involving Howie's (does anyone remember Howie?) girlfriend Shelby and her room-mate and best friend Anderson. The entire story is 16 pages, and anyone who wants to is welcome to read the whole thing if they ask. Otherwise, I've included a few little slices of it below the cut. If you only have time for one of

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[sfemonster]

Man, I am not endowed with oodles of free time, so it might take me a day or two, but you TOTALLY have to send me the full text of this story. PLZ JACKIE.

The first scene is FANTASTIC. You left it off at exactly the perfect moment, too. WHAT ARE THEY DRESSED AS? I CAN'T WAIT TO FIND OUT.
I love how you build the characters through each subsequent excerpt. There's such obvious growth in them/their friendship through the years, and the last scene is beautiful and heart-wrenching all at once. (p.s. I totally love how you write Shelby as a larger girl/woman without smacking the reader over the head with it. She sounds gorgeous and confident and I love it.)

Like I said, I TOTALLY want to read this in full, now. :D :D :D

[seraravi]

Aaaw, somebody actually read it! :D

[seraravi]

Yaaay, smiling is good! Tell me your email and I'll send it along :D

[seraravi]

Story has been sent :D