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Aug 31, 2007 11:45

The location changed slightly as the time trudged steadily on. It had dumped Gojyo in one of the beds that stood in the room he and Hakkai would be occupying tonight. How he had managed to get from the not-so-steady barstool all the way up the steps, down the corridor, through the door and onto the bed was a mystery to both the kappa and the ( Read more... )

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First comment Daaaaaance!!! purpleicicles August 31 2007, 14:26:31 UTC
This was simultaneously just soooooo funny and amazingly sad. The way you describe Gojyo's drunkenness is hilarious, and his mental narrative even more so, but the emotional turn at the end was sweet, and honest and just so Gojyo *hugs him*

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lillypuff September 1 2007, 19:15:00 UTC
If nothing else, when Sha Gojyo was out of his depth, he went out to the Marianas Trench with a deadweight around his neck...OMG, if that doesn't describe Gojyo perfectly nothing ever will!

You did an awesome job with this, you write Gojyo's thought process when he's been drinking so well. And the end...ugh, poor Kappa, so sweet and sad.

Beautiful job!

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lillypuff September 1 2007, 22:48:13 UTC
Oh, and Happy Birthday =) YAY!

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candika October 22 2007, 22:30:55 UTC
That was amazing! Gojyo was very sweet and sad and spot on.

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