Fic: Put On (Good Old-Fashioned Lover Boys)

[seren_canis]

Title: Put On (Good Old-Fashioned Lover Boys)
Author: seren_canis
Rating: G
Word Count: 1479
Pairing: Remus/Sirius
Summary: He sees him everyday, like clockwork. Remus is an apprentice at a bookbinders and private-school boy Sirius passes him everyday, until the day they actually talk. Non-Magic AU.
Author's Notes Dedicated to mypretty_art as a companion for her

Comments

[kat_scratches]

I really love the flow in this. It reads, to me, the way a leaf swirls downstream -- if that makes any sense to anyone but me! Very lyrical, and almost erotic without actually being erotic. :)

[seren_canis]

Thank you so very much! Tbh I was very nervous about this one, I thought maybe it was a little too lyricaly, but I'm so glad you enjoyed it :) Ha, I totally understand what you meant with the lead swirling downstream image, and I'm so very flatterd!

Oh my, erotic you say? I am very flattered indeed :P

[kat_scratches]

I made a friend of mine read it too, but she's terrible at commenting, so likely she didn't comment, but she did tell me she loved the style too. So, there you go.

[seren_canis]

Thank you so much :')

[lovely_seraph]

Very cute. :3

Not even gonna lie...

I'm a sucker for school uniforms! G'aww XD

[seren_canis]

Oh me too *swoons at your appropriate icon*

My school uniform was a boring old polo shirt, why couldn't we have sexy blazers and ties??

Thanks a lot, so glad you enjoyed :D

[lovely_seraph]

Ha ha- no school uniforms in American public school xD

*sad face*

[seren_canis]

No, no, no...school uniform SUCKS X_x I'm lucky I left for college at 16 and am still there now and we can WEAR WHAT WE WANT!!! (the novelty hasn't worn off yet XD)

As sexy as school uniforms are...in practicality terms, they suck :P

[epithalamium]

This was a lovely accompaniment to Jamie's piece. I love how your words flow, the way that I can just imagine Sirius lighting up a drab little street just by walking down it.

Also, this line: he sees the boy with the rain-cloud eyes and sleepy smile, his clothes immaculately arranged for the day, and Remus can’t help but be pleased. just made me very happy. Rain-cloud eyes and sleepy smile does that to me.

[seren_canis]

Thank you so much! :) So glad you thought it flowed well, and so glad you liked Sirius.

Hmm...sleepy, smiley Sirius is just too yummy, yes? :3

Anyway, thanks so much for the comment so glad you enjoyed :D

[wolf]

Ooh, I love this! The ending is perfect, and ties the fic up very well. :D

[seren_canis]

Thanks so much! Tbh I reaaally struggled with the ending, I wanted the dialogue to be perfect as it was what the whole fic was leading up to, I'm still not entirely happy with it, but I'm SO glad you enjoyed anyway! :)

Thanks so much for the comment!

[seren_canis]

Aah thanks so much! :D So glad you think this does the art justice.

"There's so much between the lines"

What a compliment, so happy this made you happy :D Thank for the comment!

[seren_canis]

Thanks I REALLY appreciate it :') Good luck with your fic writing!