Fic: Moonlight

[seren_canis]

Title: Moonlight
Author: seren_canis
Rating: PG
Word Count: 3,842
Pairing: James/Lily
Summary: It had all began one afternoon during Transfiguration, on Halloween day. James and Lily are forced to spend a detention together, but James is distracted.
Author's Notes Dedicated to my best friend in the entire world magenta8 ! My first ever James/Lily, written for the

Comments

[magenta8]

oh ... my...LORD!!
I'm not even yanking your chain this is the best Lily/James i have EVER read!!!
Seriosly it's amazing, i love how you've written it. Its so so sweet and unique and amazing and gaaah!!
like normally it's all like james and lily are head boy and girl bla bla bla lily hates james bla bla then she loves him bla bla bla but this is like EPIC!!!
NOBODY can write like you!
xxxx

[seren_canis]

Awwww you don't mean that! *bats hand* :'D

Siriusly, what a wonderful compliment, I'm so glad you enjoyed! Lol yeah I suppose it's not really like the normal ones XD I was kind of worried about that, but I'm so glad you like it! :D

You give the best comments <3

Ps. notice how Remus was the one who inadvertently brought them together *winkwink* ;)

[magenta8]

I forgot to write my favourite parts!

Okay Well first off i like the idea of Lily chasing James into the forbidden forest! Like guuurl dont you know there are werewolves and shit in there jeeez!Also i find it sweet how James is all over protective of her telling her to "Go home lily". Thats not a quote from this thats just a LOTR quote :P
I like the part where the stag is in the moon light and hes all like look at me i'm fucking beautifule!! But its so adorbale how he's all ready to get beat up for her awww!

When she cracks her head on the ground i was like OH HELL NO!! Then i just imagine this horrible thewlis werewolf coming to perv all over her. Uch!

Awww the hospital part is the cutest thing i've ever read. It was perfect!! Sweetest Lily/James momment.

I love it more than Thewlis/george Mcfly!
Bravo my friend BRAVO!
Xx

[seren_canis]

Aww damn Hannah you didn't have to send me another comment :'D though of course I'm glad you did .

So glad you liked the chasing-James-into-forest-thing! She's so silly, she doesn't know it yet but she loves James so she couldn't let him go in there alone!! :O Thewlis or no Thewlis! LOL I also love the whole "Im a motherfuckng stag LOOK HOW GODDAM MAJESTIC I AM!!!!" thing XD XD I don't think I can even count how many times I referenced the moonligt in this thing rofl.

James was also "oh hell no!" when she fell over, methinks! Like, GET OUT OF HERE OR MY FRIEND WILL RIP YOUR INTESTINES OUT AND NOM YOU D: XD

Soooo happy you liked the hospital thing, it's hard making them kiss without it feeling rushed, isn't it? :) That's one reason why yours was so great! It totally DIDNT feel rushed! :D

Again, thankyou thankyou it's all for you honeydoll :D

[magenta8]

I want to gobble up your fanfiction because it's so sweet!!

[seren_canis]

YAY. :D

[ichthyes]

Cute story. I LOVED this paragraph:

James Potter’s behaviour is as predictable as a Shakespearean villain’s; he is overzealous and eager with Lily, crass and comfortable with his friends, sure and very selective of his answers in class, and very, very Gryffindor around the Slytherins. Always furiously loyal and just ever-so-slightly thoughtlessly reckless, that is.

It really sums up James quite nicely, haha.

[seren_canis]

Thanks for the comment! :D So glad you enjoyed. x

[secretsolitaire]

Sweet fic!

[seren_canis]

Thank you! So glad you enjoyed :)