Poem

[serendipidous]

This poem is from a couple of weeks ago; I like it, but I'm in a revision-y sort of state of mind. Any & all comments welcomed.

Comments

[aerisdeia]

I drove through Cary, NC just the other day! ^_^ To think I've been so close all along!

[virtual_rabbi]

what about "phlox-filled pots" on the first line?
how about "scab" instead of "scar" for the last line?

where you been kid?

Ben