Inner Demons - Chapter 57

Oct 31, 2012 23:27

Title: Inner Demons (sequel to Starting Over)

Chapter 57/60: Cursed

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A curse and some... lizzypotter14 November 1 2012, 15:30:53 UTC
Wow, just wow! This chapter was absolutely incredible. I found myself struggling to communicate with Hermione, just like Harry was doing. I know that the end is near for this story but I find myself thinking, how are you going to close this story with all the drama still unfolding. I cannott wait to hear the solution to this awful predicament.

In the other spectrum of this chapter, I'm so proud of Ginny's strength and determination in the face of adversity. She has come a long way, and seems to be making progress in the right direction.

I hope we hear from you very soon.

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Re: A curse and some... serendipity_50 November 2 2012, 22:50:21 UTC
I hope you hear from me soon, too. I'm *planning* to finish the story this weekend (I know, I know, I've said that before, but I mean it this time.)

Anyway, glad you liked it. Thanks for sticking with me.

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Re: A curse and some... willit14 November 14 2012, 03:24:40 UTC
Dear me.... that was one h*ll of a roller coaster ride in this chapter. The Brightest Witch of our age certainly lived up to the billing here.
I also love how you wrote Ginny here - with a tempered backbone and fierce determination. D*mn nice to see her back with her fiesty attitude and determination. (and I secretly hope that she is the reasons that they can get back.)

That Dolohov! (censored deprications!)

I love it!

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Re: A curse and some... serendipity_50 November 18 2012, 13:45:23 UTC
Thanks!

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tartanboxers November 2 2012, 17:24:34 UTC
Personally, I wouldn't say he's completely unscathed. He's in a position where he has to watch his loved ones go through their lives, yet he cannot share anything with them. It's like he's permanently relegated to the cupboard under the stairs again. It's mental torture, and as far as anyone knows, it's permanent.

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serendipity_50 November 2 2012, 22:48:55 UTC
Ash (aka tartanboxers) answered your concerns about Harry better than I probably could. I'm glad you liked the chapter.

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p1k14 November 2 2012, 03:15:57 UTC
Wow...I lost a full night of sleep because I couldn't stop reading your story until the very last chapter that's posted. You wrote this story and Starting Over brilliantly.
I'm glad that the old Ginny who fought Death Eaters is back...she doesn't allow circumstances to bring her down. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Please update soon.

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serendipity_50 November 2 2012, 22:47:23 UTC
Welcome! So glad you're enjoying the story. I hope to post more soon. Thanks for joining the party.

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One extra chapter? OH BOY OH BOY pinkphoenix1985 November 2 2012, 21:28:30 UTC
I feel like you've given me the best birthday present when I read the note that there would be one extra chapter (my birthday was on the 27th of Oct) So thanks ( ... )

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Re: One extra chapter? OH BOY OH BOY serendipity_50 November 2 2012, 22:46:10 UTC
Happy birthday! If I get finished with the whole story this weekend, like I plan to, I may post the last few chapters all at once or over a couple of days, maybe before Christmas, depending on how busy my betas are.

Glad you liked the chapter.

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Re: One extra chapter? OH BOY OH BOY pinkphoenix1985 November 3 2012, 17:54:20 UTC
Thanks!

And I'm praying that it takes you a little longer since while Harry and Ginny might not like it-- I like having your chapters to look forward to at the beginning of the month!

I saw in another comment that you're doing Nano that is awesome! I'm also doing Nano this year as well :)

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Re: One extra chapter? OH BOY OH BOY serendipity_50 November 3 2012, 18:00:59 UTC
I actually just wrote the final words to the final chapter about half an hour ago. It still needs editing and beta approval, but it's pretty much done. Although I think I'm going to do a short epilogue, too... maybe. We'll see.

Good luck with Nano!

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tartanboxers November 2 2012, 22:23:38 UTC
You know what I just now realized that I totally missed when I betaed this (however long ago that was)? Harry is now in a position where he can empathize with what Ginny goes through whenever Harry goes on assignment. He's now in a spot where he can understand powerlessness to act as he watches his loved ones potentially go into danger. Utterly, utterly brilliant for your resolution. Cheers!

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serendipity_50 November 2 2012, 22:44:41 UTC
You actually missed something?! I don't believe it. ;P

BTW, aren't you supposed to be writing? I friended you on NaNoWriMo, although I'm cheating by counting my ID words instead of just my novel. I'm going to finish ID and get back to the other this weekend.

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tartanboxers November 2 2012, 22:46:52 UTC
I'm doing writing sprints later. :P And if you friended me, you ought to be able to see my word count. It's not too bad.

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serendipity_50 November 2 2012, 22:51:27 UTC
No, not bad at all. I haven't checked it today, but you really kicked it yesterday. Can't wait to read it.

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