Inner Demons - Chapter 59

Dec 10, 2012 00:00

Title:Inner Demon (sequel to Starting Over)

Chapter 59/60: Decisions

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pinkphoenix1985 December 11 2012, 18:47:42 UTC
Oh Boy is Ginny going to kick Harry's ass when she gets him back-- she is definitely going to revel Molly in her fury towards Hermione, Ron, but especially Harry.

I absolutely love that you showed how much she had grown up, as did Malfoy. I am worried about Harry and his irrational insistence not to tell Ginny-- he seems to be the only one who hasn't "grown" up in that aspect not like Ginny.

I like how you included Dominique's birth-- it was a lovely inclusion to mark the passage of time and as an indication of how much Ginny had grown and change since Victorie's birth.

But Serendipity!! You ARE EVIL!!! how could you not save Harry what with only one part (and an epilogue!) left :( *cries* I am still holding out hope that things end well for Harry and Ginny. That is all I'm saying...;)

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serendipity_50 December 11 2012, 23:52:48 UTC
I'm glad Ginny's growth is coming through as I'd hoped. And, don't worry. The final chapter is long enough to save Harry and then some, and the epilogue wraps it all up nicely, I think. I hope you will, too.

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pinkphoenix1985 December 13 2012, 17:51:51 UTC
yay! *claps* I was wondering how you were going to manage the happy ending that you promised in ID part one (four years ago o_O it has been a brilliant ride)

In anticipation of the last part and the epilogue, I'm rereading ID and your words and writing still make me sob in parts even after reading ID for the 5-6th time.

*hugs*

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serendipity_50 December 13 2012, 18:08:34 UTC
*blush* thanks!

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