wee scene

Nov 08, 2005 23:48

still in the beginning.
Rodney/River. (tho' not in a romantic way, i promise.)
this is, on the whole, my second bit of SGA fic, my third in all totality. constructive criticisms welcomed and encouraged.

Inescapable. )

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rokeon November 9 2005, 01:03:11 UTC
*snickers* River is totally the anti-Rodney.

And it didn't take Simon long to figure out how to handle him, did it?

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arysani November 9 2005, 17:54:31 UTC
i guess i always perceived Simon as someone with that sort of attitude - "you are five. shoo." and because Rodney is the same way, (tho' a little more harsh in it) i'm curious (haha, sounds like i'm not the one who is writing it!) as to how they will duke it out, if it comes to that... *g*

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dreamfall_nnwm November 9 2005, 01:32:06 UTC
Nice scene! I'd love to see more interaction -- like when he realizes just how much River does understand about things mathematical and scientific...

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arysani November 9 2005, 08:31:31 UTC
oh, i'll get to that.

that particular scene was just there and had to be written down.

but there will be more...

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arysani November 9 2005, 08:32:36 UTC
haha. yes, totally.

i've got so much planned for these two. glad you like!

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azarsuerte November 9 2005, 07:31:47 UTC
*snicker* Oh, that is so McKay. Just assumes that everyone around him knows less than he does...boy is he in for a big surprise. ;-)

Whee, thanks for posting!

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arysani November 9 2005, 08:34:17 UTC
the way i see it, he'd never acknowledge that someone knew more. just stop talking about how they knew less.

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apatheia_jane November 9 2005, 09:50:43 UTC
arysani November 9 2005, 17:52:40 UTC
i know that i'm not going to go in any sort of romantic direction with it. but i definitely have ideas to keep going. if i could only make myself do my papers, i could let the muses run rampant... :op

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