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[arysani]

Title: Broken (1/?)
Rodney/River (again, not in the romantical sense)
Plot: (i feel like i can't do a plot summary at this juncture without giving stuff away that i haven't written yet. therefore: contained herein is Rodney and River geekery.)
Credits: characters are not mine. neither are the worlds. and the singing part is care of amezri, who brought

Comments

[dreamfall_nnwm]

Nice, I'm continuing to enjoy it! Looking forward to more. One teensy little formatting thing -- would it be possible to add an empty line between paragraphs? Pretty please? I spend hours and hours and hours looking at computers and undifferentiated blocks of text make me have trouble focusing. Loved the characterization, and River was perfect. I rather liked Simon, too. And the last line was perfect. Nice job!

[azarsuerte]

Ooooh, all sorts of intriguing possibilities. *grin* Very cool!

[alison985]

Rodney and River...hm, I like.

[lerah99]

“Not crazy. Broken.”

This is beyond Awesome! Rodney and River in the lab is such a perfect concept. Thank you so much for posting this.

[arysani]

actually, see this: http://community.livejournal.com/serenity_gate/3978.html wherein i have consolidated three bits into one, and then followed by http://community.livejournal.com/serenity_gate/4333.html wherein it is continued.

not done by a long shot. but at least there's more. i'm so glad you like :)