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My Declaration. My Plan. My Lyrical Revolt - new version.
Jul 13, 2007 12:32
I've read all the messages, heard all the talks (
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galleon_lore
July 14 2007, 14:39:07 UTC
Admirable sentiment, but rhyming couplets really only work in small doses. Try a different rhyme sceheme next time.
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