Sounds Like Heartache To Me [2/2] Safe

[serialvortex]

 Title: Sounds Like Heartache To Me
Chapter: Two - Safe
Author: 'Rah.
Rating: *shrug* Coarse Language.
Pairing: Rydon
POV: Ryan
Summary:  (“You will. One day.”
“I’ll never mean to.”
“No one ever means to,” and I know it’s true because I’m pretty sure that people don’t want to die of cancer or fall victim to alcohol poisoning. The world just drags people

Comments

[silviasometimes]

Hey,
I utterly adore your writing.
Lauren's got me hooked.
But I'm much stupider than her, so I'm asking what happened at the end.
-Looks down-
I'll re-read it.
-Looks back up with a grin-
Lawl.
I saw you on saturday.
You were crossing from town hall.
& there were those chinese people in the street parade.
& they scared me.
But yeah,
My point is that I saw you.
& now I'm swaying away from the point that I'm meant to be making about this story which is that it's awesome.
But, I'm gonna go now.
Before I make a fool of myself even more.
-smiles-
Bye, x.

[serialvortex]

Ummmm.
The ending is sorta weird.
Ryan was functioning on the assumption that Brendon had accepted that he would never love him back, but he hadn't. For Brendon, losing that hope was losing the part of him that had clung to it - which was the part that cared about the world and his surroundings, his friends. In losing that hope he was able to become entirely selfish. But it sort of backfired because the way that selfishness manifested was in his desire to hurt Ryan, which in turn would hurt Brendon, and well, pretty much everyone.
The reason he said no when Mitch asked him to marry him was because he wanted to be there for Ryan, but when he did finally accept the truth he felt that there wasn't any real point to sticking around because Ryan was never going to be able to reciprocate in the way that he wanted.

In a way Ryan was actually in love with Brendon, it just wasn't romantic. He hung onto his every word, adored him, was dependant upon him, he just didn't want to have his babies.

Anyway.
Night, hun.
:B
*hug*

[silviasometimes]

Oh.
& the bonds add song is by Emiliana Torrini.
^^

[livebythebooks]

I am finding that the majority of the fanfiction I read on Panic! at the Disco is a load of badly written, overly-dramatized nothing. This is most certainly not part of that majority.

This is wrought with emotion. It's almost torturous. I can't wait for more.

[serialvortex]

Aww, thank you ^^
I try. :P

Maybe I should stick to short stories :\

[livebythebooks]

: )

I certainly know how you feel about the short stories. I've been trying to write a novel for two years now and I haven't made that much headway. Short stories, flash fiction, haiku- quick pieces are what I excell at.

[serialvortex]

My best stories are usually around 5 or 6000 words long. But, you know, shorter works too :P
I can write long stories as well, but they have to be chaptered. I can't work otherwise.
Quite strange.
: ]

[pooperxscooperx]

That was simply divine.
The connection between Ryan and Brendon was bitter and hopeless and at the same time beautiful and multidimensional. This was wonderful.

[serialvortex]

Thank you : ]

[damnpetewentz]

that was bittersweet. i still want to take these two home and love them and make them forget all their issues and the world forever.

[serialvortex]

Haha, no way I was going to give them a happy ending :P Like the summary says, in 4 out of 5 situations they won't love you back. Or that's my exprience anyway.

Eeeh, glad you enjoyed it ^^

[damnpetewentz]

yeah it would have ruined it if you made it happy. and that is true all the guys i've loved, have never loved me back!

[serialvortex]

I wouldn't say that none of the guys I've loved have ever loved me back. Just, four out of five of them were looking for sex and amusement. One out of five of them had serious trust issues.
Gosh, almost makes you want to be a lesbian. But, from my experience, girls are not much better.