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serinamalfoy

'Night and Day' update

Feb 08, 2005 19:01

I have successfully finished the next installment of the Night and Day series. I was so surprised to see that I had achieved over 1000 words - I had been struggling around 200, so I'm really happy now. I really enjoy this one, but I fear that it's a lot like All I want. This is probably because it's done the same way. *sigh* But I still like it, ( Read more... )

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burningchaos February 8 2005, 11:57:49 UTC

Wow , just wow. I am so non-verbal this morning, sorry so I just have to go with wow...

serinamalfoy February 8 2005, 12:01:37 UTC

*laughs* I love non-verbalness. It means I did something good today.

*snuggles* Thank you so much for always reading and commenting. You don't know how much it pleases and excites me. *dances*

faeriechii February 8 2005, 20:25:56 UTC

The scarred you and you went willingly...

Think you mean 'They'. *pets typo demon*

I love how everything came together at the end and your use of symbolism. Poor Draco... *sniffles*

*hugs* Happy Chinese New Year, by the way.

serinamalfoy February 9 2005, 00:18:20 UTC

*laughs* Thanks for pointing that out for me. *scolds typo demon*

*hugs back* Happy Chinese New Year to you, too!

crikkita February 8 2005, 21:17:38 UTC

Hmm, I like this one. It's different from all the others - it's not really angsty, even though it definitely isn't fluffy. It's just ... there. But in a really good way. Hmm...

I admit, though - I'm glad you had Draco show up! I'm such a sap. ;-)

Sorry, I'm sleepy. I'm really enjoying this series, and thank you again!!

Looking forward to the next one!

serinamalfoy February 9 2005, 00:47:06 UTC

This particular story had so many idea and turns that it wanted to take. There was one way, where it would have turned fluffy, and that was the path I was originally taking. But then, I noticed a way I could go that would make it angsty, so I kind of strayed off the fluffy path. But I got caught in the middle, and I didn't want to make it too angsty, so I left it be.

Draco was supposed to come in all along, but I just didn't know exactly what I wanted him to do until I finally decided that I wanted the drabble in the middle of angst and fluff. Like you said, it's just there, and I think Draco's performance/reaction really establishes that.

*tucks you in* G'night!

jamie2109 February 8 2005, 21:17:55 UTC

Oh the angst!!!! I'm a bit incoherent right now, brilliant though.

serinamalfoy February 9 2005, 00:48:50 UTC

I'm a bit incoherent right now, brilliant though.

*hugs you* You don't know how happy that makes me! Thank you for liking it so much!

sarcastic_irony February 9 2005, 00:15:11 UTC

Beautiful angst. It was sad and wonderful and reminded me of "The Giver" because he never really understood the red until the end. Yeah! Go English class!

serinamalfoy February 9 2005, 00:52:35 UTC

*sits back and thinks*

Hm..I didn't have 'The Giver' in mind when I wrote this, but that's a very interesting point that you have.

*sighs* I might not have seen it because I read 'The Giver' 3 years ago for school. I have my own copy, but I haven't touched it in ages.

*runs off to read*

It was sad and wonderful

*hugs* That makes me happy! Thank you