'Night and Day' series update - a Piano drabble

Feb 09, 2005 15:52

Well, I feel very accomplished today, thank you very much. I woke up to find a nice number of comments, and replied to all of them. Then, after a quick bite to eat, I finished off one of my essays, finished one of my one shots, which I hope to be posting on FA fairly soon, typed up the minutes for my meetings, printed out the lesson plan that I ( Read more... )

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crikkita February 12 2005, 12:03:57 UTC
Yummm... I'm catching up again, and ooh, what a great place to start! Put aside for a moment the fact that I cringe involuntarily when I think of a fully-grown teenage boy sitting on top of a piano (I have this thing about being really careful not to put anything on top of pianos). This fic is really fun, and mighty sexy. I like the idea of Draco as a pianist - I've seen it a few places, recently, and I think it fits nicely. And Draco scribbling furiously while Harry sits there, naked and frustrated, is absolutely priceless in so many ways! I have to admit I thought it was a bit of a stretch to have Harry fail to realise that the piece he was hearing was what Draco had just written, especially after it had given him that insight into Draco's personality. You could have gotten to Harry's disbelief and Draco's annoyance at that, by a slightly different route, but hey, I'm not here to beta, I'm here to squee! Seriously, this is great! Oh yeah, and the last line? guhwibblemeltsdieshappyguhhhh...

Okay, I'm off to read another!

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serinamalfoy February 12 2005, 12:09:14 UTC
*sigh* Dear, this only goes to show that I'm not perfect. I know what you mean about it being a stretch when Harry was oblivious to the fact that Draco wrote the song - I knew it was one when I wrote it, and I'm bad for not having corrected it. When all the drabbles are done, I will definitely be going back to fix them up.

Anyway, it's good to see that you're up. I should have the next drabble up soon - I'm just finishing it up, and I should have it posted soon. *kisseshugs* I hope your concert went well? Or is that later?

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crikkita February 12 2005, 12:16:27 UTC
Aw, honey, none of us is perfect! Of course! I suppose it's natural, but I really didn't mean for you to focus on the concrit in my review - I really thought it was great (and hot)!! *cuddles you messily*

I'm catching up to you... *G*

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serinamalfoy February 12 2005, 13:47:18 UTC
My LJ notification is not giving me half the notices it should be! I'm glad I'm going through all the comments to be sure I've replied, because I'm missing several comments. *scowls at LJ*

Well, dear, you're the only one who has been willing to tell me what's really "wrong" with my work, like the good teacher you are! *beams* I love you, so don't worry about it!

*snogs heatedly*

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burningchaos February 12 2005, 13:18:38 UTC
Oh that is so sweet *sigh*

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serinamalfoy February 12 2005, 13:21:43 UTC
*grin* Glad you like it! *hugs*

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copper_beech February 14 2005, 02:19:25 UTC
Excellent!

Well written, love the ending!

:-)

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h_d_shipper February 14 2005, 22:23:27 UTC
Way too cute for words!

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