LJ Idol // Week 9 // Marching Orders

[serpentpixie]

The competition is divided into three layers:

Squad, squad ‘shun!

The first, Wing.
The second, Region.
The third, Nationals.

Open order, March!

I could, if you asked me, repeat the whole routine -

Right dress!

I will still remember it when I am ninety-nine years old.

(I intend to die skating down the river from Castleford to Ely on my hundredth

Comments

[comedychick]

Shouting is not as easy as it looks.

I'm a naturally a quiet person. I probably couldn't shout to save my life.

I always love the way you structure your entries. This was awesome!

[hellboy]

Lovely turn on the prompt ♥ I've heard stories from my mother, who was in the Air Force, about being the one to shout the commands during marching, and you make it sound so lovely! (yanno, in comparison to her XD)

[snarkerdoodle]

Shouting is not as easy as it looks.
You are not shouting correctly.
Shout better.

I really, really loved those lines in particular. :)